Chapter 2 and 3 are the same O.o
swasdiva- Tue 13 May 2008
Such a bittersweet piece. Your writing style was fun to read; it was fresh, engaging and humorous, which was a nice contrast to the seriousness of the subject matter. A few grammatical mistakes here and there, but overall the tone effectively portrayed Kagome's life and her friends' love for her. Gotta love "Love You To Death" too. You do a good job telling the story of that song with this fic. BTW, have you checked out the YouTube vid by Muchuuninari with the same song? It's amazing, I think you'd appreciate it a lot. ^_^
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