hello, i like your story so far but when i got to the third chapter i was totally confused and didn't know what was going on.
who is the albino witch? And what was happening in the second part with Inuyasha and Kikyo? Can you maybe explain it a little better? Its hard enough already with the chapters being so short.
but its still pretty good so far, i just think the third chapter is too confusing, i have no idea what was going on in it.
WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 05 Jun 2008
| What did kikyou mean? How did Inuyasha betray Kagome? What about this Dark Demon? What was with the "hero drowning" ? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P
| Uh...you are going to have to hurry with next chapter, I'm on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what the hell is going on. Great story!
WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 04 Jun 2008
| I have to say... this fic really rocks! I was hooked... so much vivid details... it just came to life for me. I wonder how Kagome got stuck doing fights in the arena? Who shot the arrow at her? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P
Looks like he was the one that was tamed and so easily....."My Goddess." hahaha
This is too good.
Elisa- Wed 04 Jun 2008
| I really liked the first two chapters. I don't think I've ever read a fic like this but I can't wait to see where you take it. ^_~
| I am really enjoying the story so far. At first, I was nervous that your story would be to similar to others that I have read in the past. But once I read the first chapter I realized that it was very different from what I have read in the past. I hope you update this story soon. Happy writing!
manisha- Wed 04 Jun 2008
| your storyline is really good. I likeit when kagome is powerful. i hope you update it. Your writing has fine language with good grammar
Mangoesgirl- Wed 04 Jun 2008
It's awesome man.
Update soon :D
| Its really good, so did she get tamed? Is there more to the story?
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