i loved this! i never even thought of that chocolate thing. i also didnt know white chocolate is alright for dogs. go figure. well i loved it!
your fan,
Holysinner
Fluffy's Lady- Wed 23 Jul 2008
english isn't your native language? you're lying. lol. you write it better than many who speak it as their native language!! (coming from me that is quite the compliment. i'm anal about grammar). congrats on a good one-shot. it was very cute.
Li- Wed 23 Jul 2008
Awww, that was cute! It shows that she was at least paying attention to not only his looks and brains, but his anatomical structure as well, aka his species ^_^
Your english was good as well so don't worry ^_^ Keep it up! Ja Ne!!
Sandy- Tue 22 Jul 2008
i liked it a lot it was very cute : )
miss-darkness- Tue 22 Jul 2008
oooooooooooo this is sooooooooooooooooo cute. i love it, you should make it into a story.
CUTE! I love it! are you going to continue the story? that'd be awesome if you decide to continue it.
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