Did a different writer take over the story and write the ending? Except for the haircutting bit, I was thoroughly enjoying your story until she fell into the well. I'm sorry but I was disappointed with it from there on out. It did not seem to fit in with the previous portion of your story. I almost felt like I was reading a totally new story. For example at the awards ceremony where Kagome got angry and made a scene, I felt embarrased for Sess. It just didn't feel right. I'm sorry. I rarely, I mean rarely give any negative comments, but with this story, it deserved a better ending.

haha funny i love good fics like this when i 1st started to read these things i only read ones in the modern times but now i'm having a hard time on deciding which ones are funnier loved loved this fic i'll be sure to tell my friends not that i have much but hey i've got a few or two but only one gets on this site so i'll pass the word

Well I don't want to waste your time with a long rant about how good your story was but just so you know I thought it was extremely good and very well written.

Thanks,
Mary