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frozen angel by destinys-angel

those who seek to harm me

Frozen Angel

Chapter 1: Those who seek to harm me

It had been a normal day just like any other, kagome had woke up, leaving

her 20 minutes to gey ready for school. She rushed around getting ready for school as

fast as she could. She rushed down stairs to say goodbye to her family... the sight that

she saw was devistating, her family was murdered, the murderer had shot them, her family

was gone...she broke down, she couldn't handle it.

kagome: mom, souta, grandpa...there gone...

Kagome was occupied in crying to hear foot steps that were creeping straight to

her. At the last moment kagome spun around to see a man with long black curly hair, with red

eyes.

Kagome: w...who are...you?...why are...you here...l..leave me alone!

I am naraku, and i am strictly here on buisness.

Kagome: buisness...what do you mean buisness?

Naraku: What do i mean by buisness...hahaha...my buisness is takin' care of, my job is done,

well almost anyway, there's one more thing i have to take care of...

Kagome:...what...would that b...be?

Naraku:...(smirks evily) you

Kagome:(gulp)...then...y...you...you murdered my family...but why?

Naraku: simple, they owed me money, and they took to long to pay it back!

Kagome:...but, my mom was...she worked hard...she saved up as much as she could...but...

why couldn't you wait a little longer...WHY?

Naraku:(smirks even more evily) well now dont we have a temper...!

Kagome: WHY WOULDN'T I...YOU MURDERED MY FAMILY...i have the right to be angry

Kagome was terrified of naraku, there was something about him that gave her the creeps.

She didn't like being around him, there was an evil aura that emitted from him.

Naraku grabbed kagome by the hair, and pulled out his gun. Kagome shreiked in pain.

Kagome: please... i beg you don't kill me... please

Naraku: and why should I

Kagome:...I...I..

Naraku: thats what i thought

Naraku was about to pull the trigger, when a strange burst of power knocked him out. Kagome

realized what had happened, and that naraku was out cold. Kagome ran out of her house into her shed to

grab her bike. She had no were to go, that was the only family she had left. Tears flew out of her eyes, so

she couldn't see were she was going. Kagome flew out into the street, she was hit by a car. Her body flew

3 feet from the car, and was knocked uncoinsious.

Kagome was rushed to the hospital, were she lay now in a coma. The doctors feared that she

might not wake up do to her severe injuries, so they placed her in a frozen sleeping capsule. Knowing not

when she would shown signs of awakining.

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