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Entwined Souls of Day by MysticWolf

---Trouble Brewing with the lecherous Monk---

(This is my second fanfic, though I will still be working on Broken Promises as well.)

Well hello everyone. I like the idea of this fanfic a lot so I would like if people Read, Rate, and Review or I might just not have the heart to continue... especially since I am writing two fan fics at once. This goes for rating it extremely low as well so try and rate the ficcy at least an 8 or above, I hope that's not too much to ask. Well anyway reviews will be posted at the end of a chapter and the notes as well in the future so that you can get right to the fic. I will let you read now, I hope you enjoy this fic, Entwined Souls of Day.

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"Kagome have you seen Miroku? I haven't seen him all day since we entered the village... I bet he's being the hentei that he always is..." Sango sighed a bit grief fully. Sango wore her usual attire today that consisted of her white kimono that was also purple in places, and had a green bottom to the kimono, the dress looking part, and the obi was also the same color. Her raven black strands of hair were down instead of in a ponytail and Kilala sat beside Sango, swishing her two tails and glancing around at the many sites the village held. Sango watched Kagome with her calm, yet sad black eyes. "Sango, don't worry about Miroku. You know he cares for you. I am sure he's making his day... productive... Oh Kami! I am so sorry Sango, what I meant to say is I am sure he is with Inuyasha..." She was trying to reassure her friend but she had messed up with what she said making Sango sigh heavily. Kagome wore her green and white school uniform with the red bow and she carried her large yellow backpack. She watched Sango sympathetically with those warm chocolate color eyes as her black hair blew in the slight wind as well. Kagome then came up with a brilliant idea. "Why don't we just go find him and see?"

Sango thought over her friend's brilliant idea and smile nodding. "Ok it's worth a shot. I think my hand needs to meet his face anyway if he's flirting with every beautiful woman he comes across. Sango picked up her weapon, Hirakotsu, which looked like a giant boomerang. Kilala stood and began following Kagome and Sango who were now walking to find that lecherous monk Miroku. "Miroku! Miroku!" Kagome called out but Sango put a hand over her friend's mouth. "Shh... whatever he's doing I want to catch him in the act." At hearing Sango's soft voice Kagome yet again nodded to her friend understanding what she meant.

After a while of walking, passing by many village huts Kagome and Sango came to an abrupt halt at the sound of Miroku's laughter, followed by the laugher of many young women. Sango smirked and grabbed Kagome's wrist, pulling her to the window of an inn where the sound came from. Sango released Kagome's wrist and both peered into the window watching to see what Miroku was up to. Sango was not at all please by what she heard or saw but she made no sound as of yet.

Inside the inn Miroku was surrounded by 2 beautiful women that appeared to be twins. Both had red hair and sparkling blue eyes and to Miroku their figures seemed perfect. You could however held them apart for one wore a pink kimono and the other wore yellow, also one wore her hair in a pony tail while the others hair only reached her shoulders. Both giggled and Miroku was taken by surprise as the one in pink kissed him. But the monk didn't deny it and instead made the kiss more intimate. Soon Miroku wrapped his arms around her and both were making out. Then finally after 3 minutes the one in yellow pulled that one away and went into a lip lock with Miroku while rubbing his back with her gentle touch as the one in pink now massaged his shoulders.

"More Sake Miroku?" The one in pink asked as the girl in yellow broke the kiss and smiled flirtatiously at Miroku. "Yes please!" Miroku told the girl and then drank down the sake, this was his fifth one counting, and the girls were using their charm to get him to drink for they were flirts themselves and Miroku was so very vulnerable. "Ladies would you bear my children?" Miroku asked that question that he must have asked a million times. "But you're a monk are you not?" The girl in yellow stupidly asked and Miroku waved the question off. "I'd love to bare your child, I will bare you the finest child Miroku!" The girl in pink said excitedly and got a glare from her sister. "No I will you handsome monk." The one in yellow said. Miroku grinned at them both. "We can take turns." Of course Miroku would never actually do something like that to Sango but he was drunk and the girls were merely joking as well and that could be heard from their tones. "Ok then tonight." Both giggled and turned but suddenly a loud crash was heard.

Sango had been watching the would thing and tears came to her eyes. She was shaking with anger by now and it seemed as if she was about to explode. "MIROKU YOU FILTY LEECH!" She screamed out of anger after she had heard the girls say tonight. That's when the loud crash was made when Sango's Hirakotsu smashed threw the wall of the inn and returned to her. The girl was in tears and turned running off. Kagome had wanted to comfort her and ran after but she was too late for Kilala had transformed and Sango leapt upon her and they were off, disappearing into the distance.

Miroku was still to drunk to realize what in deed had happened. "I must go now ladies farewell!" Miroku said in a cheerful manner and stepped through the hole in the wall that had been made by Hirakotsu. When it had crashed before it had been inches away from his face. As soon as he exited SLAP! Kagome had smacked Miroku hard across the face and he too the chance to rub her bottom. SLAP! Yet another slap and the Monk fell to the ground. "Miroku! What were you thinking... you broke Sango's heart!" Kagome turned and walked away to find Inuyasha. She'd send him to get Miroku because she'd probably end up strangling if she yelled at him. He had gone too far across the line this time. Making out with two strange girls.

Inuyasha could be found sitting in a tree on a low tree branch at the edge of the village. Shippo was waiting for Kagome to return so he could jump into her arms. Soon Kagome could be seen in view and she didn't appear happy. Shippo darted over and leapt up. Kagome caught the tiny kitsune and smiled faintly, Shippo always could make her smile. "Kagome what happened? Are you alright and where's Sango and Miroku? Inuyasha has been complaining that we need to go..." Kagome opened her mouth to answer but she heard Inuyahsha's voice. "Yeah we were supposed to leave early this morning. Where the hell were you three?" Kagome of course was already in a bad mood. "Sit boy!" She yelled and the tree branch broke as Inuyasha hit the ground hard. "Ouch! What was that for Kagome!?!?" Inuyasha asked as he stood. Kagome sighed and calmed down a bit and she managed to calm down the hanyo as well. Inuyasha wore his normal red haori and normal red fire rat robe. Shippo also wore his normal outfit that consisted of a yellow vest and blue-green kimono pants and shirt with a pattern of white seeds on it. He also wore the blue-green bow in his hair. Inuyasha flicked his inu ears and awaited Kagome to say what she had to say, and Kagome did, she explained everything. "That hentei..." was the last thing Inuyasha said before he ran off to find Miroku.

Meanwhile in the western lands the great tai youkai Sesshomaru stood on a cliff watching what lye below. His demeanor was cold and his marvelous golden eyes and facial expression showed not one sign of emotion. His white tail blew in the wind behind him as part of it lay over his right shoulder as usual. The sun was beginning to set and he heard the tiny voice of Rin calling him. Lord Sesshomaru turned and began walking at a slow pace in that direction.

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There won't be much of Sesshomaru in the first few chapters because I am setting up the stage for the plot if you know what I am saying. Remember to Read, Rate, and Review.

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