Body Heat by Drawkcab

A/N and mini story

If you are going to review please tell me one or more things you liked about the story. Then one or more ways I would make it better. Even if it's a misspelled word I would like to know. Thank you.

-Drawkcab

02/04/07

2:21:54

Well, this chapter has hit the press. A bit confusing, other then that I like it. People have wanted me to write longer chapters. I'll try, not guaranteeing anything.

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01/29/07

7:06:11

I have been ask more then once to have Body Heat be a multi-chapter. So by popular demand I will be making this into a longer story. The only problem is I need a beta. I have a lot of trouble writing multi-chapters.

If you know a good beta or you are one your self please tell me in a review or message me. I had one lovely, beautiful person say they would be my beta. I in all my stupidity deleted the review. I want to apologies to this person. If they still wish to be my beta please tell me.

Also if you could tell me if you would like this story to have a lemon in it. I will not post the lemon on fanfiction.net but if is wanted I will make one.

The Mini Story will be updated with each new A/N. I put in this because I want people to read my A/N (I will not put any other A/N in the story) and I have to put something in here so that I won't break the rules on fanfiction.net.

Mini Story

A five year old sat crying by a tree. He was not crying because he had dropped his ice-cream or because he had sand in his eyes. Even though both these things had happened on this day that was not why he was sobbing. Oh no, he was a big demon he wouldn't cry over stuff like that. The real reason was that today his mother had died and his father came home with a new woman. An ugly smelly human woman.

He could not bring his mother back. Nor, would he get rid of his new step-mother. For his father would bring out his belt should he do anything disrespectful. So when he got the chance he had ran in the large property his father owned and hid. So no one could see his tears. After all father never like to see him cry.