Hello,

I love stories where it is Sesshoumaru who is fighting to gain her affection! The first chapter seems rather interesting. There have been a few grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too bad.

There are two questions I had while reading this chapter:

1. Why is Naraku beating Kagome and not his daughters too? It must have another reason than him being a bad parent.

2. Why didn't someone notice that Kagome is hiding her scent? Sesshoumaru for example?

I hope you will include this questions in your next chapters.

And I'm looking forward to your next update!

Well done!

The summary for this newest story of yours has piqued my interest.

Poor Kagome.  A victim of child abuse by a step-father bent on breaking her for some inane obsession of hate.

Why would he single out and zero in on Kagome for his pleasure of punishing her with constant pain?

Looking forward to future updates to see what direction you take this story.

Happy New Year!!!