BRAVA! This chapter qas amazing, I was right when I said you would be the one to make me like Toran of all the fics I have read you have done her character the most justice. Also.. that little quip about his hips being lethal ohhh my that was delicious! There was definitely a lot od thought that went into this chapter and Kagome was also given a good amount to think about. i cannot wait til the next chapter! 

Everything is going to go to hell when he finds out that it was Kagome's wish that turned him. 

Also I wonder what is the human thing that he has to feel that will allow him to turn back. And is feeling it enough or does he have to acknowledge it. 

I adore this story. Thank you so much for giving it to us!!

This chapter was so entertaining. I love the dynamic between Toran and Kagome. Sesshomaru has this crazy reputation with the ladies that seems out of this world. Feel free to make these chapters as long as you like. I can't get enough of the inner musings of Kagome and Sesshomaru.

I loved Kagome's pep talk! Fits her perfectly

Oh. Em. GEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! What an INCREDIBLE twist! O.o  I seriously doubt that ANYONE saw that coming. Srsly! Of course, I'm sure we ALL loved the incredibly yummy, long, satisfying chapter, but the ending? Whoa. Honest... WHOA. See? This is why the Wiccan keeps the website moving but doesn't try writing herself. There is no way on the face of this earth that I could come up with anything even HALF as intriguing! Can't wait for the next exciting installment!!!

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~~me~~

Wow that was an amazing chapter.....  I think I will like this side of Toran always loved her character.....  Poor Sesshomaru feeling defeated but not down and how could he with Kagome at his side....  Well done can't wait to read the update.

Not the cliffy....uugghhhh  ...my soul...lml I love it this story has captured me from the very beginning...keep up the good work

Aww I thought we were getting towards the end but at the same time im soooo glad we aren't!!! There's still so much to solve after finding Rin. I love this story. I'm going to be so sad when he tries to leave her if/when he turns back to a demon. I was confused on why they didn't recognize Toran I'm like??? Am I thinking of another cat demon? Was that not her name?? Lol I'm glad you cleared that up! Amazing job as usual and please update soon!! 

I think this has become my favorite story

Alright, sooo this time I didn't rage and break down to you in your server lol. There is a lot to unpack in this chapter some that gives me hope. I am so happy to see Kagome get ANGRY again and to remind him for the things that could have already transpired between I dont want to make this a super long comment but I am looking forward to the next chapter also I have never been a fan of the Toran character however if there is anyone that can change my mind it would be you. I cant wait to see how you write her. 

I also want to emphasize how much of Kagome'a character we really see in this chapter. Her interaction with others, little nuances, she deserves to be happy. Really enjoyed it in all of its detail. Reading the reviews from other fans of this story is always interesting. Yes, even if Seas turns back, he definitely won't be happy. I don't think I want to stick around if were really waiting until he turns back before progressing their relationship into something positive. Just thinking about it makes me feel like she's in a toxic relationship. Seeing how happy and comfortable she was around others and suddenly down, on the brink of tears and heartbreak right when shes in his presence - does remind me of a past unhealthy relationship. Sigh. I trust you and look forward to the next few chapters before I fully rage at my device haha

Wow, even though this chapter was 50% new character introduction/interaction, I surprisingly loved it. It didn't feel like a filler and felt necessary in the stepping stone that is their relationship. You know you did a great job when readers care about new characters. Very nice insight in what Sess is thinking and a peak at what Kagomes life can be like. She is really being a bigger person and seeing her happy is refreshing. Poor handyman, he seems like such a sweet genuine guy. In a different world, Id be happy to see Kagone with him. Sigh. You really know how to break a girls heart with their hot and cold relationship. Honestly, it's so dragged out, albeit in amazing detail and rewarding chapters, we are really inching along in this arch of their relationship. Welp... look forward what your next installment, it's always a good one.

Shoot, I dunno if it's the preggo hormones or what, but the whole part where Sess is telling Kagome how he feels about her being with another man, but not against it only because he's going to outlive her by centuries - as demons will do because he won't choose her as his mate - really broke my heart once again for Kagome. I don't know why she is holding onto her virginity with a white-knuckled grip though, but I'm going to assume you have plans for that as well? But dang, if I were Kagome, I would give in to Sesshoumaru, knowing where his intentions (of what he keeps saying they are) lay, and just go on with my life, even if every man will probably measure short (literally I'm sure). But it's not like there aren't other demons that might fall for her and would want to mate her. Sess should think about that ;) Please update soon! 

This is very aggravating because I love your writing, but this story is getting less happy wth every chapter. Kagome is upset. Miroku is upset. Sesshmaru is upset. Why are you doing this? Why do you hate us? We are going closer to battle and backwards in communication. Inuyasha and Sango are the only ones in the family/group making any progress. The Inu-tachi canot be mangled in battle without everyone being happy. Tetsuaiga must pay.

Good chapter. I liked Kagome and Sango's talk about their relationships. I do think Sango is stretching with her relationship with Inuyasha saying they don't talk about the future but she isn't concerned because she knows he loves her. I just don't get that vibe from their relationship. It seems just very physical and sex-driven to me. 

I am interested in seeing where Sesshomaru went and how this affects the story. It has to be worth it because he was gone for a week. Especially since Sesshomaru was the one stating time was of the essence for the gang, and they needed to speed things up and get to Rin. I feel like they are losing track of that and getting further and further behind on their quest. So hopefully they pick up some speed on the next chapter. 

I feel Sesshomaru is pushing Kagome away a little because he is afraid of truly loving Kagome. I feel they need to act on some things and feel things instead of trying to make the other jealous constantly. Its time to just let it happen and feel whatever they are feeling. I wish Sango would have told her that in the hot spring. Everything isn't so nice and neat in love. They have to let go and just try the relationship to see if it is worth it. 

Can't wait to read more of this. 

Incredibly detailed, intensely involved, revealing more of our merry band's internal thoughts, struggles, and foibles... and so nice and long!! I definitely feast on chapters like this one! Sess is predictably irritating, Kags is predictably clueless, but for all that, some interesting interaction there. Can't wait to see if we get to learn what Sess was up to, and what happens with the foray on the tigers. Thank you so much for such an enjoyable read!!!

:D

~~Wiccan~~

He deserves it. His prejudice and biases as a demon got in the way of his true feelings. I hope that Kagome does not pine after him no longer. It's sesshomaru's loss. I know he won't be happy when he turns back.

What to say.... that I haven't already raged about in your discord channel.... well this chapter was literally a rollercoaster for me. It pissed me off  A LOT made things better and then pissed me off again... Im pretty sure if I could cause bodily harm to my favorite characters I most certainly would. Sesshomaru need to stop being stupid! 

You probably don't read or care for my questions but you answered it anyways! I kept wondering when Kagome would get some action and leave Sesshomaru jealous lol. Thanks for this it was sweet! I wonder what he left to do though!!! I also wish we got to know Mirokus love that actually made him cry. Shame. Anyways please update soon.

another great chapter