I'm sad this story is ending, but I have been grateful for it. I love his protective nature so maybe a scene where he feels he needs to protect her but she is strong enough to save herself, the conversation with her mom, a shut scene now that he's demon. Those would be a few things to see in the final chapter.
The build up and occurrence of their joining was very practical and sweet. Even though it took a long time to get there all the stuff that happened beforehand really gave the experience texture and told a great story (within a story) of how they came to finally be where they are...totally worth it...this chapter is very hot...topics that I would be interested in being explored in the epilogue would be 1) what are their thoughts on having kids...would they be full blooded, hanyou, thoughts or feelings on how that would turn out 2) Kagome's thoughts on being mated to Sesshomaru...how would things change for her? 3) the difference between demon Sesshomaru and Kagome sexual experience and human Sesshomaru and Kagome experience...that conversation would be very cool i bet. Im really going to miss Sesshomaru's and Kagome's conversations. I really look forward to their next adventure.
Finally after all the talk and and worries put to rest they finally have sex that was the longest read I had ever done for a smut scene and boy Kagome and Sesshomaru were learning a lot about one another... At least they enjoyed themselves and now that he is yokai again she finally agreed to go west with him... Can't wait to read more.. until next time ...
Kagome is so evil!! Torturing poor Sesshomaru. They finally fuck! Fina-fucking-ly!!! I like your depiction of it it sucks your first time. Some worse than others. You gave her the most realistic reaction, I loved it. I love how understanding he is!!! I'm gonna miss these fools sm. Ofc you know you did AMAZING! This beautiful ass story. I'm most certainly keeping my eye on you and your work.
Whew, jeebus I finished it.... there was a lot of late mornings and a lot of hours that had cutting into my sleep while reading the story but damn it if it didn't end just perfectly thank you so much.
P.s.. yes you are a dick... that was some serious slow burn.. but I loved it and and still love your writing and you!
Cant wait to see what is next!
Ok so, making me wait 500,000 words is not an issue. I really thoroughly enjoyed the slow burn. You should publish romance novels. Because...while I enjoy smut...most of them get to the smex way to soon and unrealistically.
Also, I'd like to say thank you to the rona for letting you pump this story out, it might be the only good thing to come from 2020 except for my baby due in April ????
Jokes aside, this is one of the best s/k fics I've read in the almost 20 years of reading them. If dokuga still had awards going on I'm sure you'd be winning multiple categories. I wish I was half as good of a writer as you are!
Thank you for the distraction from the mess of the world right now- it was much needed.
I was sooooooooooo proud. I couldve cried. I was ready to be pissed off at Kagome. Like. YOOOOOOOOOO. I'm in love with your writing and i literally check daily for updates
I had to review, I just had to! This was such an amazing trip. One that I started on, left and suffered until I came back to! Omg all the emotional fatigue was worth et lol I am a fan now more than ever
I had accepted in my heart that he might never change back but damn did you write a hell of a story that kept me on edge the entire time. I'm so glad you wrote this irs amazing and kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time.
Miss C (Chapter 35) - Wed 11 Nov 2020
Bravo, what a ride!!
Mel (Chapter 34) - Mon 02 Nov 2020
This!!!! All of this should have been the Inuyasha sequeal!!!!! Sesshomaru's and Kagome character development is sooo good! Hell even inu's! Like my god I hated him and Sango lol but now I like them. Great writing! thank you to sharing with us.
Awesome chapter as usual. I dont know if I want to know how this story ends asap or wish it could go on forever....or at least wish for a sequel...you have a tremendous gift of story telling via dialogue. Please update soon!!! Just in case I forget to say this...thank you for this story...it has been an amazing escape for everything going on through this pandemic.
AHH I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Adored Inuyasha in this chapter
Aww I'm glad he didn't go off & get himself killed! Though admittedly I would habe liked to see him mess his enemies up human with Tetsusaiga!! That would've been different & awesome. But I'll take his maybe safety & making up with Kagome over that anyday. Please update soon!
There is a lot to unpack in this.
1. Poor sessh getting it from all sides
2. Loved the flashback! That was definitely a new and interesting take on the toga situation.
3. Poor Kagome man that was heartbreaking
4. GO INUYASHA!
5. I don't needddd a happy ending but damnit if they went through all this just for one of them to die in the end imma be sooo devastated.
6. YOUR ALMOST FINISHED!!!! YESSS!
As always great chapter I loved it.
Ma'am. I started cursing when I got to the end. How in the entire hell do you have me crying, yelling, pissed off etc etc like every emotion on the spectrum in ONE chapter. Then it ENDED. Whewwwwwwwwwwwww. You're writing is absolutely impeccable. It makes me sick at the same time but keeps me coming back daily
Anonymous (Chapter 34) - Mon 02 Nov 2020
I've been checking everyday for this ...thank you...it's all starting to come together...
Allison (Chapter 33) - Wed 21 Oct 2020
I have been busy catching up. Life has been hectic retail life. I was excited to read so many chapters and I get to the end of this one and realize we are coming to the finale. I have enjoyed this one. I'm glad Sesshomaru forgave her but didn't make it easy on Kagome. She was wrong and needed to realize that. Hopefully, she won't keep anything from him again.
I love how they have grown throughout the story. Can Sesshomaru finally get some though. haha Almost everything stops him. Kagome blocking him from all girls in the beginning. When they decide to sleep together he can't fit. Now the drugs stop him this time. lol
I still believe that probably when they have sex this will bring him back to his demon form. I will have to wait and see. Can't wait to read the end of this. This story has had great detail and imagination. It's been fun to read.
Mecca (Chapter 33) - Tue 20 Oct 2020
Oh my god, he's gonna go as a human and die a Spartan death?? Noooo.... well hopefully he and Kags can have a proper send off. And hopefully that changes him back... I'm sensing major angst coming up, I can't wait to read the finale! You're a genius, Susie! This story has really touched me through these covid months, I appreciate you making me feel all the feels. Thank you!
Hehe you said the title. I always get tickled when that happens for some corny reason. It certainly has been a rollercoaster with this. One I wasn't expecting but fully enjoyed. I don't know why I'm expecting a bad ending but I'm bracing myself for heartbreak, can never be too safe with you lol! Please update soon!
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