Crap.
This story isn’t going to end well, is it?
Sesshomaru will feel not only betrayed, but intentionally led astray for what he would assume to be Kagome‘s selfish desires. Which, in turn, would make his original disdain for humans infinitely worse. Then, he’ll possibly leave Rin with the inutachi because he can’t get over his feelings of inadequacy, despite what he knows to be true.
Deceit never bodes well, and as much as we want them together, maybe it will be best to put an end to their pain and their budding relationship. Before it reaches the point of no return.
I hope they will forgive each other, as well as themselves, eventually.
A tall boy can, hm? He’s beyond huge, my friend. I think GINORMOUS is the most apt descriptor for King Dong over here.
It’s a damned disgrace when a fictional character puts real men (well, some of them) to shame.
BTW...I use model Tony Thornburg as reference when I draw, sculpt, fantasize, et ceTera, about Sesshomaru on our plane... he’s just...beautiful.
Ravenously awaiting the next chapter.
-Snark
Yay Rin has finally pulled through! I want to say the worst is over but knowing you you'll surprise me lol. I can't even picture a desperate Sesshomaru I wish one of your talented readers would draw out these scenes for me! I like how you're portraying the virgin insecurities most if not all of us went through. Just so much depth you're putting into them I love it. Please update soon!! You totally make my whole day. I had such a bad one yesterday it's nice to wake up & see you've updated ????
Anne (Chapter 30) - Thu 17 Sep 2020
Oh goodness. I'm really worried how this will end for Kagome and Sesshoumaru... I'm really hoping for a happy ending! Ugh. Please update soon!! This story alone is getting me through my graduate finals!!!
Mecca (Chapter 30) - Thu 17 Sep 2020
This chapter was heavyyyy... it breaking my poor little black heart, knowing she's going to have to come clean and tell him it was all her fault for making that stupid wish... Poor Rin! Ugh and a cliffhanger! Definitely love the smut so far of course but I'm just worried about these two and what's going to happen! You're killin' me, smalls! Also: thank you so much once again for the long updates!
OMG Rin's awake yeah.... I don't know the outcome of the story and Kagome was all about to confess her wishing him human not even sure it was her fault or not... Just assuming but then he'd hate her for believing her as she believed it herself to be true.... Wow my mind is just taxed with the realization that the truth is about to come to light and Rin's faith in her protector has not diminished..... Update soon.
Allison (Chapter 30) - Wed 16 Sep 2020
Awww I didn't think any would top the last one right away but you did it again!! Great chapter. I really loved their scenes together and the smut. Very well written. Hopefully they can finally make love and she is prepared to take all of him.
There talk at the end was so sad but so in character for him. If Sesshomaru couldn't protect the ones he loved when they needed him the most I feel he would have felt exactly how you had him describe it. Even though I'm certain Rin wouldn't feel this way but he would. To have him not say or feel these things would have been out of character. But reading it was still heartbreaking.
The cliffy Rin is finally awake!! I can't wait to see what happens next great chapter.
Mariah (Chapter 30) - Wed 16 Sep 2020
AHHHHHH FUCK I NEED A NEW CHAPTER NOWWW. love love love this story. ????????????
HOLY CRAP
SHE BETTER TELL HIM
Neelixonee (Chapter 30) - Wed 16 Sep 2020
Poor Rin. How devastating. The back and forth has to be torture.
Aw poor Sesshy...we are in need of a distraction nowadays. This really had me thinking about Kehlani's song Distraction. As for Kagome...shame on her for being a coward when she could have said her secret several times by now...Man I really feel for Sesshy...though I never thought he would use all this to try to prolong things...well I think Kagome is gonna have to deal with what her decisions have caused...great uodate
SWEARRRRRRRRR you stop when I'm so into it. I could literally cry. You're an amazing writer and I simply adore this story with all my heart
Allison (Chapter 29) - Fri 11 Sep 2020
This just keeps getting better and better. Thank you update. Rin is finally found. I hope they are able to wake her back up soon. How long has she been like this too? So many good things happened this chapter. A lot of progress has happened too. I liked Inuyasha and Kagome's talk it shows how their relationship challenged and both of their relationships to Sesshomaru has changed. Inuyasha is actually concerned with his well being and notices just how much Sesshomaru and Kagome are for one another. I liked that part from him. Showed his growth and I would say his observations were dead on.
I loved that Sesshomaru didn't seek revenge this time he stayed with Kagome because he realized what really was important. He gave her a night of passion and still holding off for himself knowing that it is her first time and wants it to be special. You can see how much growth has happened with their relationship and I'm loving every minute of it. Thanks for the update can't wait till the next update.
Mecca (Chapter 29) - Fri 11 Sep 2020
Oh my gawd *fans self* um yes, that was... exquisite. I am really glad they have Rin back, and hopefully she's okay... But now what happens? Will Sesshoumaru find out that Kagome is the reason why he was turned human? Hopefully it's after they bang haha jk... Nah, hopefully he forgives her and THEN they bang ;) thank you so much for the timely updates and the long chapters. You da real MVP!
hoping for a happy ending (no pun intended haha)
Aww he left his bloodthirsty vengeance to make her cum all night. A true love story lol. If this isn't proving how much he loves her idk what else the man could do. I read this in one sitting I was so anxious to see what happened to Rin! Please update soon!
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