Also! I'm very curious of what triggered his brief transformation before and whether he can do it again sometime soon. And whether Kagome's priestess abilities will allow her to heal herself (the water purifying trick gave me hope lol) oh well, I'll wait and see!
For this chapter? I don't hate you at all! This was brilliant. Love the change of scenery, danger, development all around. It really makes you sit there and think that him becoming human was more a blessing than a curse. Otherwise, how else would he have found out that a war was secretly being waged by magic wielding humans and traitorous youkai? This was meant to happen. And now it seems having humans ally with Youkai will be the only was to see the magic? Yeah, my soul needed this. This was good.
And not gonna lie, you had me there for a moment with that wife. Sessh is kinda a virgin in this body and a part of me is like, 'noooooo, lose it to Kagome!!!' But...if it saved her from being passed around like a campfire story, then fuck he shall.
Mecca (Chapter 22) - Fri 03 Jul 2020
The pain... will be worth it.... *dies* haha oh my god Susie, you little... awesome fic writer! How the hell is Sess supposed to pull this off, I have NO idea but I can't wait to see how he does it... IF he does it... Hopefully you update VERY soon... like this weekend xD
Bear (Chapter 22) - Fri 03 Jul 2020
This is such a great chapter!!! I'm dying to fing out what's going to happen next!!
Niomi (Chapter 22) - Fri 03 Jul 2020
HMM.. if Sess really ended up sleeping with Juzo's wife.. and Kagome made a stink about it, I wonder how I'd feel. Clearly everything he did was with good intentions - to protect/save her - so can she really blame him? Most of us seem to want a mature Kagome, but if it was my man.. I don't know if i'd be mature enough to handle it. I wonder what your other readers think ???? haha, welp, good thing it didn't happen and we don't have to worry about it :D also, his Miroku-like getaway moment was hilarious.
Niomi (Chapter 22) - Fri 03 Jul 2020
Oh my god!! The drama! You are too good at building suspense. Im sure you find it sooo amusing toying with our emotions!! MY GOSH. Sess must have blue balls by now, after so many close encounters. I loved how this whole chapter focused on his perspective. The greater insight on his mind and way of thinking was good to know. Look forward to more. Thank you for these long chapters! Wow, you're out doing yourself
Ahrin (Chapter 22) - Thu 02 Jul 2020
Excellent!! It will be difficult waiting for your next update, but I'm already looking forward to it! Thank you for your hard work!
When is Kagome going to grow a backbone and start saving herself and others?
Koree (Chapter 21) - Wed 01 Jul 2020
Omg progresssssss lol I'm so happy they are kinda dating lol . I think Inuyasha & Sesshomaru needed that talk althought it went left towards the end I'm glad they talked & somewhat cleared the air . Ughhhh definitely didn't expect the ending
Niomi (Chapter 21) - Tue 30 Jun 2020
Wooo, another wonderful chapter. More character development! I really enjoyed the moment between the brothers. I realized I didn't even mention the bridge scene in my previous review. Yes, it was epic :) The moments between Kagome and Sesshomaru are getting better and better. It's great when there's a balance of perspectives. I think it gets a little carried away when it's just Kagome's thoughts. Their suuhweet love is blooming! Im starting to see this plot evolving in a wonderful, unforgettable story. It has all the right elements, and it seems like we're just getting started. Can't wait to see what's next! It's great knowing you are just as excited as us!! Thank you!! Also, even though it was just one little sentence, I can't help but feel so sad whenever Sesshomaru expresses the impossibility of them being together. It's as if all this progress is for nothing *cries*. but you won't do that to us right?
Allison (Chapter 21) - Mon 29 Jun 2020
Loved this chapter. Really loved how Kagome and Sesshomaru got to know each other better in this chapter. I loved her make out session. The talk with Sesshomaru and Inuyasha was really good too. I like the Sesshomaru showed Inuyasha that his words hurt Kagome and that he needs to trust in her strength more. All and all very good chapter. Good cliff. Can't wait to read more.
Storm (Chapter 21) - Mon 29 Jun 2020
Poor inuyasha lol I thought he was throwing a tantrum at first xD
Mel (Chapter 21) - Mon 29 Jun 2020
You're killing me!!! You give me all the sap I want and then suddenly use it to take my
legs from under me QQ so cruel! Also, am I to believe that kagome
let inuyasha make a wish on the jewel and that jewel just happened to make his brother human????????
Mecca (Chapter 21) - Mon 29 Jun 2020
Oh for fuck's sake! You are trying to kill me, I'm convinced! Poor Inuyasha! Even though he's been acting like the worst bff ever as of late, I'm glad Sess finally clued him in. Ah but this slow progression, the sweet, but idle chatter (but really sweet make-out sesh)...! I did enjoy this slow build up but really... I want them to bang already. I'm bad *shrug* Now Inuyasha is in a tight predicament (lulz), and Kagome is holed up somewhere, hopefully not too banged up... they can't ever catch a break eh? Since you'd dare to leave us with a cliffy, please. For the love of Mokomoko, please update soon... I beg of thee.
You gave me a small taste of what I wanted, Sesshomarus jealousy! And I like how they're getting to know eachother more! So cute. The bridge JUST happened we weren't overdue lol you enjoy torturing us! They really can't catch a break it'd be hilarious if I wasn't so worried about Rin. Thank you for the chapter! Please update soon!
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