i loved it.
I'm so sad for them, and I can only imagine what Kagome is suffering through. It is very hard for someone to go through miscarriage let alone as many as Kagome has. I liked the way you described her feelings, and how you took time to show her frustration, her despair, her tears, and her desperation. And then at the end, when Sesshomaru comes to help her, that was perhaps the sweetest moment. I'm sad for them, but you did a good job with this story and writing this which is hard for authors to write. You addressed this well.
Thank you for sharing this with us!
This has potential, as long as you don't bring in someone else for him to breed. I'm tired of magic existing in fanfics but never being used for real problems such as this.
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