this is a really great story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it. your a really great author who wrote this really great story.
As always, really happy (extatic even) to see an update in this fic. I liked the whole scene between Sango and Inuyasha in this chapter best, it´s both touching and provides a very reasonable (in my opinion) explanation as to why Inuyasha acts the way he does. I do feel sorry for poor Sango, though....being bedridden for such a long time would definitely drive me mad.
Also, I liked reading about the clothes-making. I´m fond of Chie-baa-san already, and she´s only appeared in that one chapter! I also love the way you portray Shippo. He just seems...perfectly Shippo-ish to me. It´s hard not to reduce the poor kid into some two-dimensional whiny scaredy-cat brat. It always makes me sad whenever someone does that, he´s a favorite chracter of mine. :D I´m so glad that you´ve made him, well, "real". You know what I mean?
I can´t wait to see what will happen next when the two main characters meet again, finally. I´ll be waiting on the edge of my seat! Please continue your good work, I´ll be cheering you on! (Meanwhile, I´ll definitely be checking out some of your other fics, even the non-SessKag you mention in one of the AN).
stars (Chapter 8) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
please updata
(Chapter 8) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
I really like your more mature Kagome and Shippou. Also how you explain Inuyasha's level of maturity.
Good work and can't wait for more!
Wispr
(Chapter 7) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
Now that was a cool look into a little of his history, also love how his clothing was made... makes sense.
Wispr
(Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
I really like how Sesshoumaru is trying to figure out his feelings for Kagome. Bloody good story you got going here.
Wispr
(Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
Cool chapter... love the touches to detail such as the state the spiderdemons body was in when Kagome found it. Really adds a wonderfulk amount of depth to the story.
Wispr
autumngold (Chapter 8) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
You made my entire day! I was just thinking about going back and rereading your story because I love it so much! Then I found you updated it! You are absolutely wonderful! Thank you so much! I'm hoping that Sesshoumaru is able to help Kagome at the cave-in! It sounds like she needs someone with Youkai strength. Can't wait for more! I love this story!!
(Chapter 4) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
Nice touch of the survivorman scene... ;) Like your spiderdemon bloody cool!
Wispr
(Chapter 3) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
You really have developed an interesting life cycle for Sesshoumaru. Love the scene with Shippou trying to explain to Kagome just what the second tale meant... her reaction was true to form.
Wispr
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