I love love love LOVE this fic. I love that kagome is not portrayed as naive and broken hearted. She's strong, ruthless, and kind all at the sametime! keep writing and update soon :)
PLEASE continue UPDATING!!!! This is the best story I have ever read on Dokuga and I'm always waiting for you to update more. So please keep up the good work.
SugarOo, I must tell you that of all the "Kagome being youkai" fics I've read, there are but a few that really impress me. You may have made Kagome a "badass" as some claim but I see her as being more of challenge for any youkai that threatens her or those she cares about. She's a more mature and self suffient being than her original self but you did make sure to add the she is still a feminine creature too. You have kept her original characteristics the same but given her enhancements that only make her more worthy of Sesshoumaru's attention. I applaud you on being able to keep up with the action and drama you began with and even though I am only at chapter 8, I get a sense that you won't disappoint me in the further chapters. Now, on another note, please do not take offense but as well as this is written I must say that maybe before posting it here you could have re checked for those pesky little errors of the past. Don't get me wrong, I understand this is just fanfiction and all but you want true and honest critiques, yes? I think this fic is extremely good reading and to see the spelling and such fixed would just make it that much better I think. You are now a well known name here and on ff.net, not to mention others I am sure and I'd just thought to give my opinion. JEN
xD Oh I reviewing under my sister's account...so yea o_o
o-o This story is awesome! I saw my sister reading it and I just picked off where she left from. I have never been a big fan of Fanfiction or rather Sess/Kag. fiction, but I must say this darker side of Kagome is bloody wicked! I love it...so different from the norm. o_o i think I'm in love now...I will have to keep my eye on this one since it has got my attention. =^_^ = again awesome work.
this is wonderful sugar00 i love it!
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