Such a great fic. I couldn't stop reading it... until there were no more chapters to read (sad face). I know you are crazy busy, but I look forward to seeing new chapter(s) someday soon (hint hint <3). Thank you for the epic reading adventure you have taken myself and all of your other fans on!

My one and olny criticism is to note that you may be repeating the characters feelings too much and explaining them in the same manner. It does become a bit repetitive and sometimes I imagine what else you could be conjuring up in that amazing storytelling capability of yours with the extra time and space it takes to reexamine those emotions/ conversations (ex: Sess and Kags throughts about the past and their regrets... conversations regarding the mating, etc).

In my personal opinion, in regard to the timeline of the story, its about time to start progressing past these explanations of emotions and start to zoom in on the big picture like building trust, add a plot to start to bridge that gap between them, etc. Baby steps rather than those standstill moments you expect in the beginning of the story. 

Once again, a huge fan and I only wanted to point out my perspective because it is such a great plot/story. Normally, if I dont care for the story or the writing style, I don't even bother to continue looking for updates and/or bother to review... but because you are awesome, I believe constructive criticism will only improve the success of your capabilities as a writer and provide a better view of the destination point for your story.

Thanks again for your long hours spent brainstorming and writing this. 

Lunachan

please update soon please

I hope the author is still looking at these reviews and even if she doesn't, I just want to let her know that I love this story. It is very dark and quite realistic in how Kagome is reacting to Sesh's actions. She didn't get Stockholm syndrome and up to the last chapter she is still quite angry at him....rightfully so.  However, I can see their slow developing relationship especially from Sesh.

i hope the author finds her muse and find some time (or at least a plan to update) because I think this is a fantastic fanfic and it would make me cry to have this story go unfinished. I am more than willing and happy to wait for an update.  A very well written and attention grabbing story!!

This is the second... no third time I am reading the breeder story, and it is agreat story. I love it so much. Because of your story, I now give WIP stories a chance. You are an amazing writer with great talent. Your story shows creativity,  dictation,  and first class attention to detail. I feel so , amy emotions when I read your story. Inuyasha was my first true anime, and the way you portray all the characters are spot on. I can only hope of where the story will go, amd I am excited for the next chapter. Thank you for taking time out of your day to make fan fiction masterpiece s. This story deserves every possible award it can possibly get, and that is from the heart. Thank for giving me something to look forward to. you are the reason I made this account, so that I can make a review of this story. It truly deserves one. 

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Amazing. Simply amazing. I eagerly await the next installment.

I love this story please do more chapters I need to know how long will it take for kagome to love sesshomaru and the other way as well. Will kagara get it her but kick. What happens next with inuyasha. Please need to know

Awesome! I love it!!!!

When is the new update coming? ? I'm living this story! !!

Well, I can't help but wonder what will happen next! Update soon please!

Gosh this story is so amazing! I can't wait to read more! I saw that this hasn't been updated in a long time, but real life is real life. I hope you do plan to update again! I've followed the story anyways in hopes of seeing you update it again!

-Paperwing

this is a dark ,well thlough story.  question  are you going to finished it???  it will be nice to see'the end'of it.

You are such a good writer, so detailed and easy to follow and get interested in. I pray for the day you update this again!! I just love this story so much!

I love this story so much please update soon! Pleeaasseeeeee

I love the story! sometimes give me the creeps, but it's a good creepy! XD I'm so ecstatic with your writing style and have been wondering for literally almost a year now if you're ever going to update again. I really  want to read more, and I'm not the only one, other people really really would like for you to update this you have 880 reviews on this thing you're doing something right to get that many reviews !and I really hope you update soon thanks!

I didn't really like the fact that he peed on her...... But hey its your story. Besides that looking pretty good

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I love this story! I check everyday for an update, I can't wait for it. I have a question as well, will Kagome ever forgive and move on from everything he's done and will they be happy together later on? 

Hello, Texanlady!! I follow your story since the beginning for sooo long! what happened? You disappeared? Did you decided to quit the story? D: PLEASE don't!!! Just as Sesshy finally was beginning to feel something and things were heading for the better! Pleeeease don't give up on us hahahaha! Update as soon as you can! I just can't wait for Sesshy to get kagome chan's love or for her to finally go back to her time and get her well deserved revenge on him muhauahuhauha whatever it is, I'm your fan and I want to know what happens ok? So please continue writing it! Hope to see you soon! xxx

I am truly loving this fic the plot ,the character portrayol  and all the details.You take writting to a whole new level and I am glad that I encountered this fic because it's definitely going to my favorites.

I'm a bit curious though when is Kagome going to TRY to escape ? And when is Sesshoumaru going to turn to reason and actually feel horribly horrible for what he did and is still doing to Kagome?

I know this is bad of me ,but I realy want to see(read) Sesshoumaru suffer and THEN SLOWLY gain Kagome's love (I still want him to suffer first)

love your fic,

Diana

ps:Is Kagome ever gonna get it through Sesshoumaru's head that what he did and is still doing is considered RAPE?,well in our time.