This story is really good. Please continue it
Just registered on this site only to be able to comment on your fanfic, and here I am having no clue where to even start. :D
Well, thank you. Right know I don't even have enough words to compliment your amazing story. I'm just sitting and smiling at the wall like some kind of retard. XD
Okay, gotta get a hold of myself... so...
First of all, I love the way you stay true to the original characters used in this fic. When I read my first Inuasha book like 10 years ago, I was only somewhat exited about the story, but found that the plot just wasn't rolling anywhere. It was replaying itself. There were characters I loved, like Sesshomaru, since he was one of those rare characters you ever saw to develop anyhow during the whole story, and characters I hated, like Kagome, who always seemed to be in trouble and never felt to learn of the mistakes she made. Plus she was presented just like a perfect girl in the next door with love problems. In your story you have given both of those characters so much more substance you actually made even Kagome interesting to me. I think the problem in the Takahash'is original books was the fact that there were far too many characters for one story and far too little time to ever learn too much about any of them. Still, the Kagome and Sesshomaru you have created don't feel like total aliens at all, more in contrary you have given them life, like every character in your story this far, they always deserved, with regrets, dreams, feelings, pros and cons. Your characters feel like they are actually living right now, and they go through changes as the time in the story passes, both physically and mentally. That is one of the most wonderful things to keep your story so lively and fresh, no matter how many times some things happen again and again in this story.
And second, it might be just my personal opinion, but I must say that I love the dark tone of this story. There's so much depression, anger, hate, sorrow... such powerful emotions lingering all the time in the atmosphere as I keep on reading. And still there's a little promise of love. Be it motherly or love you share with friends... or a lover, it is there nevertheless. That fact also brings the feeling of hope into the ending of each chapter. Hope for what, that's for everyone alone to decide.
The truth is, also I belong to that mass who likes happy endings, but the fact that not everyone may be getting one in your story just makes it so wonderfully realistic!Not everyone gets their happy ending in real life either. I especially like the fact that even though Inuyasha is one of the main characters in this story (at least I got a feeling that you have still something in store for him ;)) and he's overall loved by people in general irl, he's future seems so very gloomy and dark right now. And god how I love it!! Call me wicked or twisted or anything you want, but I just love this darkness in your characters and story. Heck, if I actually knew you I would buy you a bucket of black paint for no reason right now! XD
Third... I'd be a lier if I said I didn't enjoy this story also because of the erotic moments. To say the truth, I actually stumbled on this story a couple of days ago while searching for some Inuyasha hentai (oh the shame!). It didn't really mattered if it was pics, comics or fanfics, but after I read some lines of your fic on google and after I read through the prologue and chapter 1 I was miserably hooked to your story! The adult content wasn't even the main reason I kept on reading, though it was a big (like BIG plus), but your skill had (and still have) totally captivated me into this fanfiction. I am not much writer myself and english is not even my first language but I have to say that I adore your style of writing, and your taste in stories. ;) I actually even read very seldom, only the obligatory books we got in school and fanfics, maybe two per... a year? So congratulations! You've been the one lucky writer to get me as your reader this year, and believe me that's much said considering how lazy a reader I am! XD
I see it's been a long time since you last updated this story, and I have to doubt if you even read this comment either. I just wish, very deeply, that if you ever have time to keep on writing this specific story of yours, I'd be ultimately happy. Somehow I always have the luck to find some very nice comics and stories, only to learn that their writers aren't going to finish them... ever. So, I hope that isn't the case when it comes to The Breeder.
I once again thank you for this amazing story you've written so far. I have saved your dokuga site and story to my bookmarks/favourites and will be checking it out every once in a while, in hopes for a new chapter. I also wrote your and your story's name up to my calendar, so there's no way I could ever lose those!
I wish you the greatest of luck to your future, and send you warm hugs all the way from Finland. The days are getting shorter, darker and colder in here each passing day before summer comes again. It will be only a matter of time before the first snow rains from the sky again, since extremely little icy drops, nearly frozen, have already been here. ;)
Realy a great story looking forward to more from you :)
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