Hi, This is the second Sessh and Kag story. I like this one better. I do not see them as a couple but still wanted to read one story about them just to see what it was all about. I really liked yours. I like Sesshomaru in your story more than Kagome just because he does make me smile ( the way you presented him) he got the best lines. I fell sorry for Kagome as been rape for nealy a year is sure hell. I am so glad that she has a collar on ( really I do not feel sorry about that, I actually though " good" you will see how Inuyasha felt.). But, I guess she is in such a shit sutiation that she does not see the irony of it. The Dog put the collar on the human girl. That was priceless Llooolll
I know this is a dark story but every time Sesshomary ordered Kagome to "present herself for breeding" I though about her not been able to shout " Osuari " and laugh ( I know I should not but it could not be helped). I really felt like crying when he punished the 1rst time and whipped her, pissed on her and asked her to swallow his urine.
Now what I do not like is the fact that they will be love each other in the end. I think it would have been excellent if they in fact do not end together. I find it unrealistic that Kagome could forgive all those months of abuse even if it is so that their children have a happy family. I mean I do not think that Kagome in the manga or anime will. She is human not Jesus. She is kind hearted but not an idiot. As a women from the 21st century she will not forgive my lovely Sessh.
I can already see that she does not know what she wants in comparison to Sesshomaru. One day she says she will leave with her children, another day she want the kid to grow up with a father presence, playing with him. One day she will escape and another day she will sacrifice every thing so that her children will be happy in the loving family. Poor girl once Sesshomaru start playing with his sons ( as I am sure soon she will be puppep) her heart will melt and Sesshomaru will smirk and think "I told you I will succeed ". Andd he will as you have already decided that he will get the girl. So regardeless of what karma will bring his way he will still get HIS Kagome and her love as like we say in my country " In life, it is the end result that count" and like kenji said Sesshomary has eternity and will succeed.
Why Inuyasha has to pay an heavy price and not find happiness? Yes, he made a stupid decision but Kagome could have said no. He did not own her, he was not even her boyfriend. She was stupid too Because she did not voice her opinion which is very uncharacteristic of Kagome. She is paying for her stupidity and so is he but, if she find happiness with her abuser ( because that what Sesshomaru is even if you make hi behave better) in the end then Inyasha should also find love too. Why should Sesshomaru be the one to have it all?
It is your story and I like it regardless of those few points. I will continue to read just because I love Sesshomaru . On another not, my username is very misleading as I do not like Kagome that much in the manga/ anime. In fact out of all the females in the manga she at the bottom of my list at the same level as Kikyo. hope to read you soon.
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