Please update soon.
have red your fic over and over and I have found one major flaw in your story..........YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED IT YET!!!!!!
This is a really great fic and I can't waite to see what happens next....come on pretty please write more please
I love love love this story! I hope you will continue to write it. Your portrayal of the characters and your ideas are fantastic! Please continue to write this masterpiece. I eagerly await your next chapter!
I read the story you said you based this story after and i have to say i like this one more its better writen and explains more
i didnt believe i would like this story, but i find i am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. it is very well written and thought out. please continue the story. dont abandon it.
I've really enjoyed your story's boldness and riichness. I hope there are more updates!
Nika (Chapter 28) - Sun 20 Jan 2013
I think this story is awesome! I can't wait till the next chapter. You have a wonderful way of writing stories. Please update soon. Pretty please? The breeder is one of my favs.
kaitlyn (Chapter 27) - Thu 17 Jan 2013
look im not trying to be man but why make kagome life so damn misable and sesshomaru being the rapes what good does it im not saying i dont like the story by no means it a good story if i habe to rate it 1 out of 5 star i give it a 5 star rating but will kagome ever go home to her time
Caitlin (Chapter 28) - Fri 11 Jan 2013
keep writing!
Will Kagome finally get that blasted collar off and finally escape (hopefully with her sons)? I don't care how evil Kagura's intentions are but as long as Kagura helps Kagome out of this breeding confinement she is good in my book. I've been literally waiting for years for this plotline to happen. Btw Amazing story.
please update more this story i couldn't stop reading it truly remarkable!
Interesting story so far. I really enjoy the name choice for Aisoku, it really fits. I hope that when Sesshomaru finally realizes his mistakes and makes amends for them and Kagome finally (if she ever does) forgive him, that the son born first after that, gets a name that simbolizes new beginnings or something just as fitting as Aisoku
Moira (Chapter 28) - Mon 26 Nov 2012
Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens!
Also, maybe I missed this as I skipped a few chapters that I intend to go back to (had to see what happened when Inuyasha showed up) but why are his servants now only calling him Sesshomaru as opposed to Lord Sesshomaru?
So I'm on chp 12 And I read the authors note. I can appreciate that your're gonna make this a long story but you are quite redundant. Things and thoughts just keep repeating throughout the Tale. You are an excellent writer but when you plan on making a story go up to 100 you seem to run out of thing to say. "I want my momma"? how many times did she need to say that? grrr I so sorry its just that I dont read incomplete stories but your's intriged me but I feel it is barley moving anywhere. The best trait of a good story teller is not having long intricate lines, it being able to get straight to certain points not draging it along. Please Do not take offense to this. I love the plot and story I'm just tired of sess saying thigs like "yes, my bitch, mine, do not speak to me in such a tone, you are my breeder, you are to skinny." Sess we get it already
Zofia (Chapter 28) - Sun 11 Nov 2012
Hi!! i love this story and i was just wondering when the next chapter will come out?
Nike (Chapter 28) - Tue 16 Oct 2012
I'm hooked. I created an account just so I could follow this story, so keep up the good work!
However, I believe the tree is called 'Bokusenou'. I did see that a time or two, but mostly I see 'Bokensu'.
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