whoa Kagome said some really harsh things to inu yasha. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I began reading this fic on fanfiction.net and it just became one of my favs...Then, while waiting for you to update, I asked my friend to recommed a really good fic for me to read and she game me a link to one. When I clicked it, it turned out to be this one. See, everyone loved your writing and we're all waiting for an update.
. (Chapter 21) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
Dear lord! I don't mean to sound impatient but... PLEASE UPDATE! You stopped it on such a note that I can't wait to see what happens! Pleaae don't leave us hanging for too long, Texanlady!
Sophie (Chapter 7) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
The story is great! I just have little question if you don't mind. In the 2 chapter Sesshoumaru told Kagome if she doesn't want to be raped she would better particiate, in other words he anknowlege the fact he was going o rape her, but here he's telling he didn't rape her only claim. so what did he meant earlier?
obssession (Chapter 21) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
I HAVE JUST FOUND THIS FIC AND I MUST SAY THAT YOU HAVE LIVED UP TO MY EXPECTATIONS OF YOUR WRITING ABILITY. I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING CHOICES AND CONSEQUENCES FOR SOME TIME NOW AND I WAS EXCITED TO SEE THAT YOU HAVE THIS FIC UP. YOUR WRITING STYLE IS SMOOTH AND FLOWS VERY WELL AND THE PLOT DEVELOPMENT SHOWS THAT YOU HAVE THINGS PLANNED OUT. I AM TIRED OF READING FICS WHERE RELATIONSHIPS DEVELOP OVER A SERIES OF DAYS OR EVEN HOURS. THIS IS VERY TASTEFUL IN THAT RESPECT AND THE MAIN IDEA IS NOT SO ORIGINAL THIS IS THE BEST ONE I HAVE READ SO FAR SO KEEP IT UP I CHECK DAILY FOR UPDATES AND I AM WAITING FOR IT TO COME SOON THANK YOU FOR BEING ONE OF THE WRITERS THAT MAKES THIS SITE NOT A COMPLETE WASTE.
wynter89 (Chapter 21) - Sun 24 Jan 2010
Holy Cow! That was amazing! Its what I've been waiting for!!
I thought it was very well written, well thought out, I dont think you could have done better, even though it was very late/ early in the night/morning!
The wish was ingenious! I loved it.. Who would have thought?
I also was not expecting Kagome to be so harsh, but considering everything she's been though.. Its to be expected!
Good luck!
Isn't the armies Sesshoumaru broguht back 2 life demons, his sword only has the power to bring back humans not demons, unless u changed it 2 fit the story. But it is still a good read, im enjoying your story very much.
Wow! That was intense! I really wish that Midoriko had told Sesshoumaru that he's an idiot and will regret everything he's done to Kagome. Does he understand what she did say to him? It seemed like he took the news a little too well. Will it really take centuries before Kagome gets to be happy? Or is it just Sesshoumaru that will be unhappy for centuries until Kagome is able to forgive him? I'm so sad for Kagome! She needs to get the collar off and start purifying things ... starting with Sesshoumaru's penis! Update again soon! I also want to know what Kagura is up to!
Me again. I cannot get enough of this chapter. The thing is though, Sesshomaru should get a little punishment for using trickery to get Kagome. I guess the punishment in mind is regret over his actions. I hope that with time that he becomes ashamed of himself for what he did. As for this huge punishment, I see everyone turning their backs on him and Kikyo (though I think she has some kind of revenge in mind for losing out on the Jewel again).
I'm wondering about the kind of 'transformation' that he has yet to go through after the Kamis are done with him before everything is set right once again. Will it be physical, mental, or both? I hope he doesn't become human though. I'm sure he has yet to learn that Kikyo is barren (she deserves to be after all).That would suck if he died during all that. His death to me would be a cop-out as far as the punishment to come. He already feels like crap after his part.I'm sure he feels worse now that Kagome tossed him aside (love the symbolic breaking of the rosary). Again, this was an awesome update for someone who stayed up until 4 in the morning writing it. I bet in the next chapter, Kikyo gets extremely pissy pissy.
Sierra (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
Hey i know i leave like 2 reviews for each chapter but i luv it that much i check this like every 2 to 3 days just to see if there is a new chap and read my favorite parts from other chaptershope you update real soon luv this story and so does my best freind hope you update real quik i realy want kagome to have the baby or pup soon its says she looks 6 months while she is only 3 pretty cool ok bye
Wonderful, Awesome, i have been waiting for this chapter for a long time, thank you.
stars (Chapter 21) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
please updata
Marie (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
For writing this at 4 in the morning you did such a great job, that I just can't put it into words, hahaha!
Well now that Kagome, has let all her anger, sadness and so many other feelings out by telling and showing Inuyasha what he has done and left her to , I'm really happy for her but at the same time I just hope a long way down the path Inuyasha must go down now that he and Kagome, may work something out to be friends once more (which is why I do hope for a long story lol). Also Kagome is very scary when she is angery!
So I think for one of the very few time you have made me start to get very pissed off at Sesshoumaru. I can see that he is being careful of the pup but I can kinda tell that onces Kagome has this child if she doesn't obey him, I can see him starting punishment all over again. I wonder much long Kagome as till she gives birth because you say that she looks 6 month when she is only 3...hmm hmm hmm?
But anyways I have so much more I could say that would just be my comments and ideas of what could happen and or how I would hope for this to turn out but I love the way your doing it so I'm just going to leave this to you lol.
Soo, get lots of sleep and have a good week because I cannot wait to see where you go from here! Good on ya!
-Eve
Oh my gawsh that was the best scene ever. You wrote it so well! I was not disappointed and I love how you built up to it and had it come out so amazingly!
Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter. inuyasha got what he deserved and more! I just hope that Sesshomaru will treat her better : ( Please continue! Get lots of rest : )
Inuyasha got what was coming. I want to say that I pity him and Kikyou but at this point... I think I pity Sesshou more after hearing Midoriko speak to everyone. What will become of Inuyasha and Kikyou? What does Sango, Miroku and Kaede think of all this? And how many chappies will you dedicate to Kagome's suffering through the ages? Will her children learn of her abuse? What will Sesshou and the elite guards opinions be of humans when they finally reach Kagome's time? Will they see things much differently than they do right now? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
this story is disturbing and at some points just digusting. you gave warnings and for that i thank you. i love that kagome will take care of her baby and love it and i also love that sesshomaru is going to get whats coming to him. this story is completely different from any others i've read and i have to give you respect. you wrote a story like this and put it up despite the reactions you knew you would get. its easy for people to forget sesshomaru is a demon and there are expectations of demons. people want to make him this loving husband character that everyone can love but thats not realistic alot of the time. I even do it to an extent, so i'm not exempt from this desire to make the perfect demon male out of him. i appreciate your attempt to have both kagome and sesshomaru seen in a different light.
Good Work, keep it up and when i've gotten over the shock of reading this story i will most likely come back and read chapters when you update later. Don't let anybody stop you, i think a story like this needs to be put up so people can keep an open mind and consider different options for character development when writing their own stories.
@,@ le gasp! At last! The troof is revealed! I absolutely loved this chapter! very informative and everything! it was, like, the missing link as to how Sesshoumaru would gain the power and stuff and how they would get together, kind of. What I mean is that the wish was a very huge link as to the rest of the story, for me at least. ^-^ If you haven't changed it, I think the chapter's great as it is and you shouldn't hassel yourself. Only if you'd want to. Ano, please keep updating this fic more frequently plz @,@
Dani (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010
You go Kagome! Tell Inubaka what he did. What a great chapter this was! I look forward to the next installment and commend you for such great work.
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