Reading some of the other reviews, I have come to a conclusion. I have no fear what-so-ever that Kagome will resent her pups because of her treatment from their father. I believe Kagome is a subscriber to the idea that children (pups) are not responsible for the sins of their parents. She has shown this time and time again in the series. That is just my two cents.

Sometimes the medicine is bitter. Not every story has a happy beginning, because it is not the first steps that makes us, it is the long journey afterwards. I like your interesting approach in this story. I will keep reading to see what happens.

God this story has me torn I love the plot I do but right now I hate Sesshomaru and I never thought I would say that I don't want to read it but at the same time I'm compelled to read the next chapter even as it makes my stomach curl and tighten. UGH!

If I was Kagome, I would make sure I thought every time before I opened my mouth. She is so quick to insult Sesshoumaru, even after what he did to her. I can understand, and agree with the fact that she wants to get away from him, but she needs to learn to curb her tongue. He is not going to listen to her or care what she thinks. I just wonder if Sesshoumaru is going to allow Rin to be used the same way Kagome is? Is it going to be ok for his ward to be raped just because she is human? Thank you for the update.

He is so smug and sure of himself and his plans. I can hardly wait for him to learn that he can't access her powers without her love. I know he plans to still make use of his concubines but I would absolutely LOVE it if he could no longer get a 'hard on' for any female except Kagome. I think that would shake him up a bit. Maybe a small bit but it would be a beginning for him to realize he can never rut with any female except Kagome. The irony of it. I agree with you that with this kind of beginning, it will take a long time for their feelings to begin to change. Especially his because he is such a rascist and chauvinistic due to his culture and being so full of himself. That part about his urination was so sick and proves he has a long, long way to go to changing or somehow acquiring a soul. I'm talking about a soul with a conscious, not the cold, heartless one he now has. With my weak stomach, I would have puked all over him.

This chapter was not as intense as the others have been. However, it was very insightful to how Sesshoumaru views his mate. How could he allow anyone to treat his mate as if she is nothing. I find it ironic that Rin will be shown more respect than his own mate. I hope the sons that he wishes her to "breed" for him turn out to be loyal to their mother.

ummmm next time be a lil more specific when u say water works, i was not at all prepared for that act. it's a good story, i like the plot just have to get off the excessive cruelty such as the "water works" act. look forward to the next update

Ahh, such a great chapter in its intensity!! And a swift update too! Yay, life is good! XD I was wondering why he didn't knot within her mouth, but you explained that so thankyou!! I can handle water sports to some degree, and the fact that Sess is a dog demon makes it more understandable, but I will draw the line at scat play. :S But hey, it's your fic not mine! Anyways, thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one!!

AAAAaaahhhhhhhh........ I just want to find Sesshoumaru and give him a really good beating..... *growls*...... I can't belive he actually did that. I so hope Kagome gives him HELL when he understands what he has done to her. I really hope the little ones she will have takes after their mother and not their father when it comes to their personality. Pleace update soon I can hardly wait to find out what will happen next. ^_^

Holy cow...as I read the fic I have to keep reminding myself that Sess for the most part (while a fictional character) is an Inu and a yokai so much of what he is putting Kags through is done with a completely different mentality. Otherwise I'm enjoying the darkness you are bringing out in both characters.

please updata

This was a very emotional and draining chapter. Poor Kagome she has to go through this because of Inuyasha misguided loyalty to Kikyo and because of Sesshoumaru's search for power. I like that Kagome still has the will to fight and she should fight because she knows that she deserves better. I know you mention that Sesshoumaru knows she's from the future. So i'm curious when does he plan or does he ever plan to ask her about how men and women relate to each other in her time. I think it would be eye opening to him to learn that his actions right now are seen as dishonorable. Right now I can't see how any love will come of this. Sess is too full of himself and right now seems incapable of loving anyone. However, whenever he does start of develop feeling for Kagome I hope she puts him through hell it will be no less that what he deserves in my book. Update soon. I look forward to seeing how this will all play out in the end.

How can love grow from such horror? He has no soul. You need a soul to know how to love. He's also a sick SOB. I hope someday he suffers a deep emotional pain and knows it's for what he put her through. I just wish she didn't beg or apologize so much. Physical pain eventually heals, but emotional pain stays with you. She needs to turn all her pain into a cold, deadly hate. The kind that numbs the body. That way she'd be able to better withstand his physical torture.

Ew.

Sesshoumaru is so sick and twisted, and yet, I can't stop reading. I love the way you portray everything. Can't wait to see what's next. :3

Nope this isn't exactly the kind of story I would normally read but I love how you write. This story and C&C have drawn me in and I am really enjoying them both. I love when a story can make me feel any kind of emotion and everything I have read from you does an excellent job of that. I can't wait to see what happens next or how this story will end. Excellent job once again! Is it bad I want to see Inuyasha suffer more than Sesshomaru? LOL

Well, isn't Sesshoumaru just a bit of a masochist. Wonderful chapter, it was as all your other works have been. A well written, emotionally draining chapter. I enjoyed reading every bit of it, Sesshoumaru's behavior makes you want to hate him, yet when thinking about it or trying to picture things from his point of view you can't really hate him for thinking as he does. There were some very different situations Kagome had been put in(the last bit especially) It was really interesting to read(Does that make me weird to say such a thing?) Thank you for updating so quickly, I have no clue what else to say for this review. My mind is still going over the chapter, I apologize for rambling a bit ^^; Great job again! I'm looking forward to reading more :)

This story was interesting to read at first and now its just stupid. It may have happened with people in real but that doesn't mean that you ridicule their suffering by morphing it into something else completely. Sesshoumaru is way out of character. In fact, the part where you write about him urinating on her to mark her is almost as sick as the desire of you as a writer to make readers believe of him being CAPABLE of doing so. Please write things that are believable. He is not the anime character you should've chosen to depict a person who would go to such lengths.

i have to say i have never read a fic where sesshoumaru urinated on kagome or forced her to drink urine. it was very funny in a twisted kinda way..lol... and i must say i like how you are staying true to how truly mouthy kagome is. most people dont, they have her cowering within the second chapter. i must say you are a excellent writer and i am looking forward to see how this is story is going to play out.

Its moments like this I am so glad I am me and not Kagome. But other times... I love the story, and you are a wonderful writer. I, however, would most definatey would have upchucked everywhere if that was me. I like the plot, especially since its so different, and its going to be a very long road in this story. Yey!