LMAO! Great chapter! I can just picture Sesshoumaru playing dead. ahaha!! Too funny. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Amazing! If Kagome put subjugation beads on Sesshoumaru, it would be amazing if he fell to the ground and rolled over when she said "ROLL OVER" I can just picture that all too well

It is funny and I hope you find more to write for this story because it is so good and fun to read! fantastic!

spelling and grammar errors:

“Where’s the demon?” Ask a out of it Sango

- shouled be asked an out-of-it Sango

Inuyasha wanted to go over and terror the two apart 

 - tear

So glad you updated!  I like how Kagome and Sesshoumaru were able to sleep through just about everyone getting up.  If Sango hadn't hit Inuyasha's head I wonder how long they would have slept cuddled up together.  Please post another chapter to this story soon!

I like the way Sesshoumaru is having feelings for the group and especially for Kagome!

What fun chapters!  I like the fact that Kouga got hit.  He should be careful who he is professing his love to!  Sesshoumaru doesn't swing that way!  :)  Inuyasha, thanks to Kaede, might have to pay for his big mouth!  Maybe he should think before he talks.  Please post more soon!

Like it overall although it does have a few goofs here & there. Just in case; women is plural as in more than 1, woman is singular. Also everybody groined instead of groaned where Kaede told them to go hunt shards & Inuyasha said they'd start out early tomorrow morning.

I love it sooooo far :)

The concept is good, but there are some grammatical errors here.  When writing dialog a new speaker gets a new paragraph.

This chapter was great! I loved that Kagome all so punched Koga! ahahaha! Keep up the great work and can't wait for the net chapter! :)

I like it, although it is a bit shaky on word choice here & there.  It's weird but I get good ideas in the shower too & an author I was talking to said ideas came to her in the shower as well.

lol, kouga here was wonderful.  Dealing with him that way was to funny. keep up-dating  ty :)

please updata

lol that was so hilarious

I like the update.  Kagome and Sesshoumaru cuddling while sleeping is so cute.  Thank goodness Inuyasha was the only one who freaked out about it.  Maybe his actions kept Kagome and Sesshoumaru from being concerned about it.  Thanks for the update!  Please post again soon!

Finally got the context correct it's not shunk, swunk or swung it's shrunk, the string shrunk in the water. Don't know why I didn't figure it out when I read the chapter the 1st time.

Really like this & am looking forward to the next chapter. You seem to have a problem with to, you always put it in front of the word it should come after like it should be only to & you have it as to only as 1 example in all the chapters.

Cute!

hahahaha I would have loved to see that happen to Inuyasha! However I love this story about Kagome and Sesshomaru tied together. I love the pairing and enjoy reading your story so far. It had me laughing and I like it when Inuyasha gets paid back! Although I honestly don't hate Kikyou I do hate the way Inuyasha thinks ok if I cannot have Kikyou than I have the rights to Kagome and honestly what real woman wants to be second. I cannot wait to read more of your story, I cannot wait to find out what Inuyasha does when he finds out that Kikyou has caused Kagome and Sesshomaru's problem. I mean he is always going on how much better Kikyou is than Kagome lets see how he reacts to Kikyou messing up. I so love this plot. Keep up the great writing and I will be puting this on on my favorite, nothing works better than romantic comedy with my two favorite people.

Terri