Looking forward to the next chapter. I think swung not swunk. umm, cooperate not corroborate.
I liked it. You managed to miss several slims & 1 Songo, in the spot where she's going to cut their clothes near the bottom. It's spelled Sango but pronounced Songo, so wherever you got the Songo spelling was probably going phonetically.
Diane (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
I keep picturing in my mind what might have happened if Kikyo got it right; light, zoom, flying Inuyasha crashing into Kikyo, tinkle of shattering pottery, Inuyasha stuck to a broken hand & pot sharts for life. LOL
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
I love that Sesshoumaru and Kagome have to sleep by each other now! How cute! Inuyasha had better not bother them! I'm so glad you updated! Can't wait for your next post! More soon please!
MLMonty (Chapter 2) - Wed 14 Oct 2009
cool that you didn't do like some other chain fics where clothes and such go through it
I love your story. It's new, unique, funny, and well written, but I do have a few things to point out. Sango's name only has one o and it's at the end and I think you mean 'slimed' for your second chapter because 'slimmed' is to get basically skinnier.
Cute!
hilarious but its sAngo. not Songo
There are a few grammar mistakes and you spelt Sango's name wrong; there's an "a" after the S not a "o"
Hi,
I like this story. It is well done. It is going to be interesting to see what happens next. I laughed sooooooo hard this chapter when Kagome and Sesshomaru got slimmed...lol
good job and update soon...
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Oct 2009
I have a feeling this is going to be a long, hard trip for both Kagome and Sesshoumaru. If only Kagome could learn to talk less, and Sesshoumaru could learn to like humans. Oh well, I guess it's more fun if they don't. Thanks for the new chapter. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
I hope Kikyo gets busted for this. If her spell is revealed, she will be so humiliated. On the other hand, it's one of the few things she has done that I like...
great fic! glad to find something a little different ^-^ update soon!~
i like this! more please!
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Oct 2009
Are they ever going to be able to figure out that this is all Kikyo's fault? I hope so! How are Kagome and Sesshoumaru going to be able to handle being stuck together? Please update soon! I want to see how long Sesshoumaru's patience will last!
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