hahaha wow that was really good i cant believe kagome couldnt figure that seshoumaru was sesshoumaru anyways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
ah you had me so hooked on this story - well that and my brain has started a small peaceful protest... T_T great story! I can't wait for more! my only complaint is some of the spelling and grammatical errors, and i used to be very upset about stuff like that, but it doesn't bother me like it used to! either way the story is great and i can't wait for more! now maybe my brain will work again so i can get my lab report done... oh and poor, Kagome! gee I feel like I say that a lot in my reviews to people's stories hehe
huh, i wasn't expecting that! O.o darn, i need to get my work done, but i need to read just.. one.. more chapter... ahhh
I'm enjoying your story and I can't wait to find time to read more! :)
oh no! he shouldn't leave kagome!
Diane (Chapter 21) - Sat 25 Dec 2010
Like it overall, a bit rough around the edges with ing's where there shouldn't be among other things but not bad, 1 slight correction it's tongue not tong, Kagome burned her tongue on the hot tea during the Sesshy bit. Also women = more than 1, woman is singular.
Awww... What a nice Christmas gift. Lord Fuzzy is, well, fuzzy! How cute! :) Great story!
Ana (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Dec 2010
Lovely lovely :D Extactly what i wanted to read on a rainy day!!!
Dragoness (Chapter 22) - Mon 20 Dec 2010
Too cute and well worth the wait. Poor Kagome she really should try to work on her aim since she always is being chased. That way she can still defend herself when she forgets her arrows. Hope you feel better, you have myh sympathies I hate the dentist.
HaHa.... That'd be my luck. "Stupid rock."
Oooo... Sess in little dog form. *Cuddly!*
Can't wait for more!
REDWOLF (Chapter 21) - Sat 11 Dec 2010
You know, I like this story. It makes the reader want to read it. I am glad you updated and I like how Kagome is handling Sesshoumaru. Look forward to the next update.
AH! What is it with everyone stopping my favorite stories on cliffs this week!?! I love the thought of the old witch starting Sesshy's nickname. I could see Sess closing his eyes and getting an anime vein pulsing on his head. :P
Can't wait for more!
lmao gone? gone where? O_o UPDATE!
wah! what a cliffy! thanks so much for updating!
I cant wait to see what the witch doctor has to say!!! thanks for updating please update with more soon.
(Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Dec 2010
God I tried writing a new chapter but I'm just too stressed from school and it kinda got away from me. They were supposed to have a little disagreement and it turned into a big argument. I'm in my last week of school before chrismas break so be exprecting many chapters over chrismas break. I also want to add a new scene so the chapter will be longer.
Flitterbugz (Chapter 19) - Mon 29 Nov 2010
hahah!!!!! this is sooo aswome! plz plzplzplz update again soon!!!!!!!
God I really wanna know what she said... XP
I wonder what kags saidd haha :P update again real soon im loving these chaps
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