Reviews for Broken Convictions by Phirst

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Daniella (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Keep posting!!!!


sesshysgirl (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Oct 2013

that was heart breaking I hope shes pregnant already and fluffys going to have to beg for forgivness i dont want kagome to make it easy for him either shes always too forgiving.


Kira (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 Jun 2012

Please remember you have this fic here waiting.

Others including myself are very eager still to read what you have planned.

 


SweetNothing (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Mar 2012

I just read this story. I was wondering when you will get the chance to write more for it. I would love to know what happens. Thanks


AP (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

I just reread the author's note, you stinker!  You have a second and half a third chapter?! Please don't hold out on us! Even if you don't want to continue the story maybe consider just putting what you already have up?  Just so we can see where you were going with it? :) 


AP (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

PLEEEEEASE UPDATE! I'm seriously not above begging- this is absolutely fantastic!  I've probably read it 10 times during the last year and a half and no matter what, I always get teary!  It's such a great plot and written so wonderfully!


Yudelle (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jul 2010

Oh sorry for the triple reviews, My Internet froze and I clicked the submit button more than once. Sorry for the repition of the reviews.


Yudelle (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jul 2010

OH wow, I really love this chapter. I'm on suspense here. Please update soon, Its been a while. I Just can't wait what will happen next. Will Sesshomaru really let Kagome go? Will he listen to his mom? So many questions and very few answers lolz. Well Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome job.


Yudelle (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jul 2010

OH wow, I really love this chapter. I'm on suspense here. Please update soon, Its been a while. I Just can't wait what will happen next. Will Sesshomaru really let Kagome go? Will he listen to his mom? So many questions and very few answers lolz. Well Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome job.


Yudelle (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jul 2010

OH wow, I really love this chapter. I'm on suspense here. Please update soon, Its been a while. I Just can't wait what will happen next. Will Sesshomaru really let Kagome go? Will he listen to his mom? So many questions and very few answers lolz. Well Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome job.


theGreatandTerribleBoo (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

I just read this for the 3rd time and  I still get teary. Goodness. You could leave like you have, but I would really prefer if you didnt. 


Melly (Chapter 1) - Tue 01 Jun 2010

This is a great story~!  It is beautifully written, though very sad and bittersweet.  I'd like to wrangle Sesshomaru in this chapter for bending to the will of his court rather than to his heart.  Perhaps living for a while without Kagome will make him realize what a stupid mistake he's made.  I enjoy the fact, though, that neither character is portrayed with flawless personalities.  The flaws in their personalities make each of them a bit more relatable.  Great work and I can't wait to read more of this story!  I hope you can find it in your hard drive soon~!

Keep up the great work! ^_^


Feather (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

I love this story. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This one has left so many questions running through my head. Your a great writer I just hope you update soonish.


redpixie (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

Interesting ! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next !  :)


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

AWESOME ADD MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Kira (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Mar 2010

Heartbreaking isn't it, Kagome is forced to leave because her love just told her the children they have will not be good enought to be the heir. Wonder since they we're intimate before Kagome left will she become pregnant will a full youkai?? No one knows what the child of a Miko and demon lord would be. It would make an interesting twist.

 

Kagome not going back because Sesshomaru didn't love her enough to love the child/children they would create together, and not care what everyone else would think. Sesshomaru going crazy because he would look for her everywhere but never truly find her.

 

Would Sesshomaru even consider doing what his mother wants him to do because Kagome is gone? How can he even think that Kagome would be alright with being second best? Didn't he realize that is what happened with Inuyasha? That Kagome was second to Kikyo. What made him think she would put herself through that again?

 

Great start cannot wait for what happens next. Update when you can.


JeniNeji (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Mar 2010

This was an amazing story. Do please continue.


sesshys_mad_hatter (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Mar 2010

please please please update!!!!! i wanna know what happens!!!!!! 


GreyEcho (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Mar 2010

wow. I'd leave too. Really good first chapter. I can't wait to read the next one!


MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Mar 2010

This is fantastically promising and I am already in love with your writing. Please, no matter what, continue this so that this poor reader here can get her fix of the wonderful fiction!! :)) GOod job!! I can totally see why it came in first for the Silhouette prompt!!!!:)

Love,

MissTeak


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