Wow that was really fantastic! Please continue to write, PLEASE?
fatcatmom (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Mar 2010
WOW! fantastic story, great writing, and a real cliff-hanger. Please update soon! And keep it coming...I'd love to see a 50 chapter epic out of this story.
sad... but very well written... I hope you continue... I just hope Kagome doesnt have to share.
Lexie (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Mar 2010
aaaw :'( poor gome. i agree i wouldnt be the other woman either. and sess is an ass for allowing it to happen.
i hope this isnt a oneshot?
please update!!
Sesshomaru isn't mated to the second woman yet, but will he do it? Will he even look for kagome? Or will he just continue as if she had never been there and mate with the demoness? I can't stand that thought but I already saw that in other stories (different from yours, of course, but with the same spirit and always sess chose the wrong answer aka mate someone else as if nothing was wrong and as if kagome will come back to someone who had already remplace her) I hope it will be different this time!
I will wait and see! ^^
please, update soon
Well i definitely like this and can't wait for the next one! I've had something similar floating around in my head for a while now, but i could never get it to sound right, so i'm very eager to see where you go with this!!!! Keep up the great job!!!
toni (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Mar 2010
gimme more! that was ewxcellent. I'm hopin Kags is pregnant n she secretly havin a demon pup
FairQueen (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
wow this is wonderful. if u don't update soon like now i will go nuts. i have never ever seen such a great beginning to a story. the drama and Sess totally in character nice but i will have mine own way. like i said UPDATE :)
OMG! Oh please update this soon. This was an incredible introduction to a chapter story. Please find that second chapter, eventually they all must realize that something is not right. What of sess' mother? Did she truly not have a care for Kagome? Will Sess be too caught up with the new mate to realize his first was missing?
Samantha (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
Please god update that was intense I absolutely loved it can't wait for more PLEASE UPDATE soon
pauly (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
WOW!!! I love your first chapter, this story seems to be very interesting and from the start you can see is well writen too. I just hope that kags doesn't get too depressed and if she does that it doesn't last long, keep her strong and make sure that sessh and his new "mate" suffer a lot.
Indie (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
Wow, what a start. I think I am going to love this. Poor Kagome, I feel so heart broken for her. Keep up the good work. You have a nice writing technique.
Connie (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
awwwh poor kagome...so shes leaving without sesshoumaru leaving? i bet the 'second mate' is going to be haughty and a complete bitch...ehehe
I almost cried.. it was so sad...poor kagome. I cant wait to read more!!!
Poor Kagome!! Great start please update soon!!
Claire (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
interesting start! :) i want to read more please update!!!
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