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Quiet Whisper (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

WOW... this story is so sad at first... poor Sesshomaru, I can't wait to find out what happens to him. And now he's waking up! OOh I'm so excited to see what happens next, keep up the great work!


dayna (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I LOVE this story so far!!! I cant wait to find out what happen to Sessy all those years back that had him in such a bad condition. That is going to be one story to tell. I wonder how he is going to feel about being in a world that he is not used to but by the looks of it I think he will be able to adapt well enough. I am so glad that he is finally awake, that actually made me breath a sigh of relieve. Well I will be waiting on another update. Cant wait!!

 

Great job so far.


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

Ooohhhhhhhhh my gosh! Okai, talk about excited! This was a really great chapter, including the emotion involved with Miki's death and Hana's reaction to her passing ... Kagome was priceless in this one, and it's good to see Sesshomaru regaining some of his usual "Killing Perfection" persona. I'm curious to see how he'll react when he starts to register more things, and how Kagome is going to explain where he is and how he got there.

 

All in all, great chapter! Keep up the great work! Much Love,

 

~Aubrey


Kazanova (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I'm so happy you updated.

I'm getting excited that he's awake. <3.

I just wonder what will happen next.


No (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010
Oh My God!!!! THis is the best story! Please update. It has a smart, unique, plot, and I hope to read more. He's finally awake. I am most definitley in love with this story.....even though its more than a little degrading for our demon lord! Updateeeeeee!!!!!

KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

OMG hes showing sign now...Im glad...I cant wait to read more.


Michelle (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

AHHHHHHHHH!!!! one of the best stories ever!!!! :))) it always makes me smile when get the email that you have updated, i love how you use the medical information in the story makes it feel more authentic and real :P keep up the good work, one of my most anticipated stories


Sessylove219 (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

Ohh, I am so excited, I can't wait for the next update!


stars (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I wish you give us more


FayeMegan (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

zomgs! Wahh I need more! It'll be fun explaining to him that year it is. Hopefully he can tell her what happened to him! Updatee sooooon


Lady Kirara (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

So I have a feeling that the reason he hates that arm cuff is somehow tied to the marks on his back. Am I right ;) Extrememly well written story here. And he's finally awake. I cannot wait until tomorrow.


Yoruzuki (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I absolutely adore your story "Embrace the Silence". An invalid Sesshoumaru and his nurse is a welcome, refreshing change of pace. The writing is excellent; not bogged down with too many needless details and not so short that one can't get a clear picture of events.

 

In short, I look forward to reading the next chapter! :D

 

 


knifethrower (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

How thrilling!  He's woken up after all this time!  Kagome has to be just about having a heart attack!  This was another great chapter.  Once again, I am awed at the people who have it in them to take such intense care of another being. 


KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

THis is getting good. From all the fiction i read from you, you knew a lot about those medical term and stuff. Are you doing something related to the medical field?


snowbird (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I am so excited about this story.  I get very emotional reading it.  The plot is so different and you are doing an excellent job with the characters.  I'm an x-ray tech and worked for many years in several hospitals and am now an employee with a rehab hospital so I'm very familiar with a lot that you describe because x-ray techs do more than just take a picture of bones as most lay people think.  For those of you who have no knowledge of the medical world, you are a 'lay'.


Kazanova (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

I like how this story is going, and I'm excited that you're having daily updates. <3.


stars (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

please updata sooner


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

Wow. It's very refreshing to see a story where there's a new plot, a new way of tossing Kagome and Sesshomaru together. I'm really enjoying this, and I think that nursing goes along with Kagome's nature very well, despite the fact that Sesshomaru is, obviously, a little out of it at the moment.

 

The only thing that I can see being difficult is all the medical jargon ... I think that people can read it without getting too worked up about all the words (I actually tend to just skip over them, and your chapters are so long that by the time I get to the end, I don't remember which word is used where, so I don't look at that either) but it is a little hard to read something that you don't know anything about. One of the things I would suggest (although I know that you're too far ahead to really do this) is to write out the slang terms the first time and abbreviate them the second time, so that we have some sort of inkling as to the meaning of the abbreviations.

 

But, other than that, this is a very refreshing and well-read fic! Good job, and keep up the great work! Much Love,

 

~Aubrey


Lena (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

Well so far so good. This is different I've never come across a story like this one. I can't wait until you post the next chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon.


knifethrower (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

This is such an amazing story.  I can't wait for more!


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