wow... that made me cry...
I don't how things will work out... I have a feeling that Kagome is already dead... I mean, if she isn't, how is she going to move on from that and how is she going to handle 'the love of her life' been married? I... I am out of words... I feel so sad for her :S
This time, I couldn't stop, I cry!
Poor Kagome! :(
She had disappear for a week already! I'm so worried!
What can Sesshomaru do? Worst, he is married. She needs more than just his pity...
Please, update as soon as you can, I'm begging you, I can't wait to see what will happen next!
He's married?!?!?!?! Happily married?!?!?!?! Whoa I soo did not see that coming! Poor Kagome. She just poured her heart out to him albeit in a neurotic and slightly stalkerish way but still...What is she going to do now for work? What is she going to do period. It has to be difficult for her to learn that her past caused great pain to someone he loves. Please please update soon I'm dying to find out what happens next! *Huggs*
>.< oh what a great mess...poor kagome, there's nothing more worse that couild have happened to her....sigh...maybe sesshoumaru isn't really married anymore, but he told kagome so, to prevent getting bothered with crazy fan girls...sigh...what a sad chapter...cannot wait to read more soon...
eagerly waiting for an update
steffi :3
.....unexpected
wow
please update soon
That was soooooooooooo interesting. The culture!!! WOW!
Really nice. I applaud you. ^^
Update soon!!!! SOONER! =P
xoxo
See I knew bribery with yummy treats would work lol!! This chapter was great. It was nice to see Kagome opening up and having a good time. So anxiety is not an easy thing to over come. Now I wonder what's going to happen after that kiss!!! Lol great job as always keep up the good work!! **Huggs and more bribery cookies**
leelee (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010
the plot is really good, i'm enjoying it. nice job. but, it is a little bit ruined by improper use of japanese words. if you want to use japanese, that's great! InuYasha is set in japan haha. but please use the proper phrases! thank you! ^^
gozaimasu is not 'nice to meet you.' that's hajimemashite.
izakaya* and it is really weird to order takoyaki and yakisoba and yakitori at the same time. i don't even think that it's available at most izakayas. and people drink beer there because thats the main reason they go cause it is cheaaaap.
is the story set in tokyo? if so why is kagome riding the yokohama line? yokohama is about two hours north from tokyo and i dont even think that there is a yokohama line but there might be. and the company name being yokohama is kind of weird.
sorry! i hope this helps! (source would be i lived in japan)
oh please....PLEASE..... puh leaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeee update soon T_T
I love this lol it's funny, and sweet, and kinda... sad in a way... but it's cute!!! Please, update. :)
I agree! Something awful is going to happen isn't it?! Is he already going to have a date?!
(Holds breath)
Thanks for providing the back story into Kagome's anxiety. Look forward to the next installment!
>.< ok...i cannot shake the feeling off that kagome is going to be really disappointed after this evening...it seems you like drama and this invitation was way to nice XD
i'm sure that there will be at least a ton of beautiful women fighting for sesshoumarus attention....
he has invited her after all just because she has nowhere else to go and not because he wanted to spend the time with her in the first place -_- but i hope she is able to make a good impression nonetheless and maybe gets to hold a nice conversation with him...
maybe she expecting too much too fast C:
keep up the graet work and please update soon
steffi
SS (Chapter 4) - Fri 11 Jun 2010
i LOVE this story -- it's so sweet and innocent -- please update soon!! =]
XDDDD.......plz plz I BEG YOU to update soon xDDDD
xoxo
this is very interesting. i think it's missing something though.... like a hook. It's a really good idea and i like the story but theres nothing that JUMPS off the page. thats the only thing i think could be worked on. BUT! other than that it's great!
OMG I love it!!! I love your other story and am so happy you've started another!!! I can't wait to see where you go with this one it definitely has a good feel to it!! I enjoy your writting a lot so please keep it up!!!!!
Very funny. I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the great work.
krazy4fluffy (Chapter 2) - Sun 06 Jun 2010
LOL I love the evil Kagome...
Update soon!!!
xoxo
I like it-it's different. I hope you continue. I'm going to fave it so I will know if you do.
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