I love this. Your chapter glows like a perfect jewel. Your words are few but they are extraordinarlily beautiful. I find the picture exquisite, I can just imagine the lovely woman under the pink and white perfection of the cherry tree.
You portray Sesshoumaru's possessiveness coming to the boil and I love the way you have him rush in to claim her.
I love your writings. Everything I have ever read by you has made me feel happy and makes me sigh with the romantic loveliness you bring to life so well. Thankyou so much.
"...she was lost, floating in rich golden topaz..."
Oh my what an exquisite sentence. You make me swoon with your images, with your superb wordcraft.
I love the richness and beauty of her kimono, all those shades of blue, so heavenly. Her hair sounds wonderful too with flowers and pearls, so elegant. I really like how it is a daring thing that Sesshoumaru wants her hair down, very sensual. I love the fact she has not had her hair down for another patron, it makes it really special and meaningful for Sesshoumaru then. To be the first in something is always special.
I think it so erotic that when Sesshoumaru is working at untying her obi, he doesn't look at the knot but holds her gaze. Sigh. I could just swoon with the romance of it. Congratulations on another wonderful chapter. You spread so much joy with such short, succinct beautiful chapters. I thank you.
Short, but it packs such a wonderful punch! I like it!
More! More! Please!
Hopefully, not a premonition of misfortune for Kagome or Sesshomaru. I am wondering what the crane would signify in a dream like this. I'm sure we will find out soon!
Very evocative writing. I enjoy the restraint you use in your language, while still evoking colorful and vivid images.
I like this!
*cathstar (Chapter 6) - Tue 31 Aug 2010
I have been secretly waiting for this one! *squees* yay, for an update!
Tataru (Chapter 6) - Tue 31 Aug 2010
I have been reading about the courtesans of Japan and i'm always facinated when I see anything pertaining to them. Just last night I finished watching Sakuran and your Kagome reminds me a little of that main character. Can't wait to see where you take this, keep at it.
I must say... I did not read this story. I devoured it! I's beautiful and the discriptions of each character was fantastic. I Truly hope there is more to come. :)
So is she suppose to be like a Geisha? But are you using the word courtesean to be more inclusive? Or to encompass the fact that geisha were less likely to have sex with their patrons than courtesans were (it was all their choice or something)?
Wow! Sorry! Tons of questions there! This is a very interesting story, I must say. Thank you for updating!
hola (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Jul 2010
Ooooooo, i'm liking this story. :) :) :) Sesshomaru is so eager! i wonder what it is about Kagome that is so irristable to him.. Eagerly awaiting the next update :)
realgirl (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Jul 2010
I really like this story, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Well that was most satisfying for Kagome, being able to demonstrate such a coup to the others.Love how she was too distracted to play with their little games. Hope she doesn't get too much envy from the other girls because it might ruin some friendships. Lovely short little distraction but now I eagerly await her meeting with Lord Sesshoumaru. Lighthearted and amusing.
Oh My, This was beyond beautiful. It was so romantic and soft and sensual, I have just melted into a lovely pink puddle.
I loved the gorgeous description of Kamgome being able to feel the lines of Sesshoumaru's lips smiling against her neck. The way he wonders what it is about Kagome that has made him select her even though he has turned down all others just makes my heart flutter. So lovely.
I relish the beauty of your description of Kagome's beautiful flushed face and her lustrous dark hair spread out on the futon and the way he watches her blush even deeper as he removes his hakama has me biting my lip in pure delight.
So sublime and so exquisite, faint shivers course through me also.
Thankyou so much for your lovely efforts.
Amy (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Jul 2010
DELICIOUS! I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE, MORE UPDATES!
Anon (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Jul 2010
I love your writing style! :D
Amy (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Jul 2010
I LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!
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