I love this story. I am glad you made it were kagome can fight!
This story is great, I read it on fanfiction years and I'm glad it's on this site. I hope you update it on ff since it's been two years, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
Great story, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
Aryos (Chapter 28) - Sat 01 Mar 2014
AAAHHH I love this story! excellent plot and. Storyline. I love the characters as well.
Please find your muse again and continue the story. I am dying to see how this will end.
kinkyfairy33 (Chapter 28) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
LOVE LOVE LOVE!! very interesting twist! i was wondering what was going on. Update soon!
Venita (Chapter 28) - Sat 03 Mar 2012
Great chapter, so that what was the legend about, I can't wait fro the next chapter, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 27) - Sun 15 Jan 2012
I love this story, I can't wait to find out what the legend is about, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Well first off, I have to say I have been a fan of this fanfiction for quite some time, so seeing this update in my favorite stories was a pleasant surprise. Uh, due to the lengthy pause between updates, I felt the need to refresh myself. In re-reading your story, I found something I didn't notice before.... you kinda..seem to leave off apostrophes. When denoting possession, you will use them with names, but leave them off all else. For example, in the previous chapter, you said "Sesshoumaru's eyes..." but during the hot spring scene between he and Kagome, you said "The western lords frustration..." instead of The western lord's. There were a few words that got mixed up, but they were minor. Although there are quite a few of missing apostrophes, it was overall, they do not in anyway detract from your story writing. I just wanted to point this out to you. I remain in love with your story and the interesting path that Kagome and Sesshoumaru seem to be making towards love. I am eagerly awaiting the explanation of Kagome's new personality quirks and attributes. I want to see this person they must go see, and discover the reason she was sent there. I will be awaiting your update.
I have to wonder though... why did Sesshoumaru kill Touhi?
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Lumi (Chapter 26) - Tue 22 Nov 2011
Your action scenes are a little stale. They more or less just say what's going on without actually engaging the reader or adding much to the characters or story as a whole. There's a good base present, but it needs refinement.
What a sweet chapter. ( :
Looking forward to more.
I love your story. It is well written and has a very nice romantic pace. The plot is great. I look forward to the next chapter with impatience.
Sp (Chapter 23) - Thu 28 Jul 2011
cute. excited for next release.
I think you described Sesshoumaru's awkward and hesitating manner exactly right. It's only natural that he would be nervous, even for a youkai, in that situation. It was rather sweet and enduring.
REDWOLF (Chapter 22) - Wed 27 Jul 2011
Another fantastic chapter!
such a freaking amazing story!! i can't wait to see how kagome's and sesshomaru's relationship increases! update soon!
TKE (Chapter 21) - Thu 07 Jul 2011
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