This feels like it could be great story & while I do look forward to the next update along with many questions .You are causing many of us that enjoy your writing to suffer & I understand you have your own life to live & keeping up with a FF is most likely not on the top of your list but I do wish you to know that I personally enjoy this story & really feel Kagome deserves love & happiness with Sessh. I have to admit that it bothers me terribly that almost every FF with Kagome & Sessh is either a one shot or one in which Kagome has to continue being hunted,kidnapped,maniputlated,made to suffer emotional, mental & physical confusion,torture ,pain,longing & doubt before she ever has a chance at hapiness & if/or when she finally finds it or has the chance to find happiness, the story is either left incomplete..............or she finds happiness in the very last chapter followed by a sudden ending of the story..leaving the reader with nothing but gratitiude that she was able to find happiness but unsatisfied by a million unanswered questions & a feeling that the story ended incomplete. I can only pray that this story won't end the same...I find it frustrating that a powerful,intelligent, youkai or fire elemental with the ability to sense that she's no enemy,that she honest,innocent,kind,with a pure heart & pure soul. How he could sense & know she is honorable & unlike Miko's she doesn't kill unless she has no other choice & even then feels guilt over it,she herself has an adopted youkai son she loves & yet would still see her as nothing but a tool to use & manipulate instead of giving her an opportunity to be an ally...he obviously feels guilt for he apologized to her after lieing to her & drugging her.....I personally am finding it difficult to continue reading this,especially after he kissed her or attempted to. I fear this story will end as the others I've described...I'm trying to remain hopeful that this fire elemental will come to his senses & soon...even if his scrolls,a seer he trusts or his guilt at the knowledge of the pain he's causing her,,allows him to realize what he's doing to her is very wrong...even if the fire elemental has to have a powerful vision showing him that his use & abuse of the Shikon Miko who is a being of purity.....(& that she may be more than she appears) & if he doesn't rectify his mistake & actions against her he will not only never gain what it is he wants but he will also be punished by the Kami's himself for his acts against her & because his behavior is keeping her from a destiny given to her by the Kami's..of course that's only what I wish....this is your story & as I have no options other than to wait & try to have hope.......I wish that you update this story sooner than later
I can only hope you choose not to drag out this situation much longer with her being isolated from her friends & families
I'll be on the look out for the next update of this story
yay! nice chapter!
The water sprite is suspicious... Sesshomaru never told her he was looking for a miko... and to give informations like that... it would make me think of a trap, if I were him...
don't worry, patience is not a problem, take care of what you have to, you'll be able to concentrate better when writing afterwards ;)
Dewa mata!
Nilee1 (Chapter 17) - Thu 24 Feb 2011
Uh oh, Sesshoumaru never mentioned that his companion was a miko; how did the water sprite know that. Is this a trap?
Yes! I'm so happy to see an update! PLEASE, don't let them be separated for too much longer...I don't think I can take anymore! lol
I keep reading your updates, but I can't remember if I've ever reviewed. I really don't have anything useful to tell you about your work. I wish I did. I'm not really good at the writing stuff so I just enjoy the reading part. :-)
I hope it's enough to at least try to make you smile with this small review...I like your story!!!!
Thank you for a fun read.
lara (Chapter 16) - Thu 10 Feb 2011
I have read this story before & I really hope you update this story again very soon. I've become completely engrossed in it. This time when I read it, I reread it from the very beginning & as I finished this last chapter I found myself crying. I desperately hope you don't drag out Kagome's abduction by the fire elemental or allow him to rape her or harm her physically,mentally or emotionally. I agree he would make a strong ally in the fight against Naraku & possibly an itelligent & powerful friend but he seems so full of hatred & distrust towards all beings whether human or youkai & find it obvious that is he's lonely & probably suffering from the loss of his people/tribe/family or Mate. It seems he's heard some stories of the Shikon Miko in her fight against an evil hanyou, Naraku,whom holds a large quantity of shards.
It appears since he has an untainted shard that he's holding onto & not using on himself to increase his personal strength or abilities that he himself is not evil nor is his heart filled with hatred enough to cause the jewel to become tainted by him,his feelings or emotional state.It is unfortunate that he seems to believe,very strongly that he needs the shards/Jewel, & since he's not used the one he carries on himself,he must plan on using the jewel to bring back either his Mate or his people/Tribe/family & his plan originally was to use the Miko to collect the shards & get rid of the evil hanyou. He may have been following the plight of the Shikon Miko & her quest but he believed she was just another priestess left with the responsibility of guarding it & had assumed she was like most Miko's that are full of fear & hatred of all youkai & only out to kill them & didn't believe she'd help him in anyway willingly...........It seems he is already now aware of the fact that Kagome,even though she is the Shikon Miko, is unlike other mikos & she is different,even making him feel guilty after drugging her with the tea the first time. I can only hope that after he kisses or before he kisses her that he stops immediately & realizes that she just reminds him of someone he loved & hopefully, either his guilt at knowing he's using,drugging,lying & getting ready to manipulate an innocent being just because of what he assumed about her before he took her or he realizes he's about to make someone he senses her purity,kindness & trusting nature & feeling the sadness & pain in her aura & realizes she is an innocent being & kidnapping her from those she cares means that He is the cause of her suffering. If he knows anything about Mikos then he should know their emotions have alot to do with their power & by him causing her to suffer she may not be able to help him. I really hope he decides to try to talk to her,find out about her & takes a chance & tells her of himself & was he's trying. He may not be aware that once the Jewel is made whole again it must be purified & the wish on it HAS to be both a PURE & SELFLESS wish. You haven't told us his story or how he came to believe what he does & why he thinks what he is doing is his only option. I really hope before she suffers more he realizes that just as he was wrong about her,he comes to see he could have other options & help. I mean if it turns out that Naraku had something to do with his pain or loss & he decides to help. If when Naraku is defeated & the Jewel completed Kagome decides to wish that all those who were killed in the Naraku /Jewel debacle are given an opportunity at life.....
I have no idea where your story is going & I have really enjoyed it so far but I find that many or most of the ff stories with Sessh & Kagome involve either having Kagome suffer terribly or they are one shots about the 2 having sex. Since your story has started it has been unique showing Kagome & Inuyasha as individuals that realize they are better off as friends,it is a bit odd that he shows a considerable lack of concern for her well being with her missing after having been kidnapped by a stranger & being taken & held for unknown reasons with an unknown person at an unknown place.......after 6 years together I would think Inuyasha,Sango,Miroku would be at wits end & be in a panic not knowing if she is still alive, has she raped,beaten,sold....they seem to calm & accepting that Sessh will find her. I know Shippo is in a panic along with Sessh. I have been enjoying reading in your story as Sessh is changing in his own way & Kagome growing stronger & changing too. I also really like how you've been showing their growing awareness & attraction of each other & it was so sad to see that although they were growing closer & becoming attatched......he started to see that she had feelings for him & as he was accepting his own feeling for her & trying to figure out what to do..when they would visit her time he kept overhearing when others asked her about him or would suggest that she go for him that she would always respond that her feelings for him would make no difference because he could never like her as she was not his type & that was telling him she believed that since she was human he would never like her as a female unless she was a pure youkai female & so she had a preconceived notion from what she knew of him that he would never have anything more to do with her than the fact that they were allies & from what you wrote ,he didn't like that & wanted to change that ...but every chance he was physically close to her & felt an urge to do or tell her something,he'd fight what he felt & pull away doing & saying nothing........every opportunity he had with her alone let slip away & did nothing .....then it appeared he was going to give her something that had a handle on it (you never told us what it was or if it meant something) & as he approached her & she turned to him...as they were looking into each other's eyes 2 arms appeared behind her 1 wrapped around her waist & the other covered her mouth & as he they reached out their arms for each other...she was pulled backwards into some sort of void......now as he's searching for her,he's realizing how painful her absence is & after spending his life...decades, century's alone & how she was here & he was so busy fighting himself over the 1st woman that made him feel such strong want/need.....................& she's missing.......taken away right before his eyes
REDWOLF (Chapter 16) - Wed 09 Feb 2011
Woe....Sesshoumaru will kill this youkai for stealing Kagome. This is exciting!
lara (Chapter 13) - Wed 29 Dec 2010
this story is great I never read it till today & now I'm so absorbed that I'm looking forward to what will happen next in a panic. This story is very unique & I can't wait till the next chapter.
Meara (Chapter 13) - Tue 14 Dec 2010
What are you, like the Ruler of Cliffies!? Come on man! lol, I am so looking forward to the next installment!
species/breed but no name?! I wanna know~~! DX
Hmmm whats gonna happen now? Scary yet interesting~
Wow~ This story is great, I read all 12 chapters so far in one day! The plot is excited and well written. Please update soon~
Meara (Chapter 12) - Tue 07 Dec 2010
OMG! What a cliffie! Way too excited for an update now :-)
Ah... someone's head is going to roll in the near future... lol
Very enjoyable story, as always :)
Dewa mata
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