Reviews for Clandestine by GG

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MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Sep 2010

I've finally found the time to sit down and read this story of yours, GG! The first chapter is really promising, and I like how you've created a good introduction to the story.


Lilly Akame (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Sep 2010

InuYashas a jerk! Please update soon :)


Stephanie (Chapter 17) - Sat 25 Sep 2010

Looooveee this fiction!


snowbird (Chapter 17) - Sat 25 Sep 2010

They act like their afraid of Inuyasha.  What's going on with them?  If they want to be together, he'll just have to accept it or or go choke himself.  Sesshoumaru and Kagome are letting Inuyasha dictate their lives and she's become his prisoner.  Their decision to meet once a month seems to be the decision of a wimp.  Sorry, but I'm getting irritated at them.


Silverwing (Chapter 16) - Mon 20 Sep 2010

Poor Kagome and Sesshoumaru was so sweet in the last chapter! I can totally see him as a dog with ears pressed back, like he is thinking he did something wrong! Love it and thanks for the review!


Lilly Akame (Chapter 16) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

I really love this!! They are so cute! And InuYashas an idiot, I wish he'd just go to hell with Kikyou right now and leave them alone :\


Sophie (Chapter 16) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

OMG! I'm crossing fingers for Kagome's luck! Stupid Inuyasha he just had to put his foot into such a beautiful relationships! I love it <3 -as always-and remember I still need more!!!!


snowbird (Chapter 16) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

If that had been me he called a whore, I'd have slapped the shit out of him.  Kagome let's him talk to her something terrible.  Also, he has no right to forbid her to leave the village and behave the way he is.  She may be part of his pack but he's not a proper pack leader.  Also, why has Sesshoumaru not come investigating as to why she had not met with him for so long after asking to court her?


Sess Koibito (Chapter 15) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

Yikes! Time for Kagome to take a lesson from Kikyo and seal Inuyasha back to the sacred tree! Update again soon! :)


Sp@ceMonkey (Chapter 15) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

Over ten thousand reads and only twenty reviews?

 

I feel your pain.

 

This story deserves more reads than it has, and certainly more comments. I really enjoy every chapter-- the only improvement would be to make them longer. Also, I think tossing some drama in there will be a good way to both pick up the plot line and boost reader interest. I'm not sure how far you planned to take this, but if you were thinking of going for the long haul, this is an excellent way to start.

 

Keep up the good work.

 

Sp@ce. 


Sophie (Chapter 14) - Sat 11 Sep 2010

Awwww I just came back from my vacation and saw how many new chapters you wrote! And what chapter are they! I love this story you are putting a lot in a few words with an amazing finish! I'm not sure if that made sense but in other words I love it! Keep writting :D


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 14) - Sat 11 Sep 2010

>:l stupid hanyou!


Black Light Brightness (Chapter 13) - Fri 10 Sep 2010

i like this story! sone of the chapters proved more imagery than others and i wont lie and say that i like them all equally because while all the chapters are great, the interactive scenes between Kagome and Sesshomaru are much more expressive ^_^  (This is a POSOTIVE review by the way!)  ANYWAYS! keep writing! ^_^


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 12) - Sat 04 Sep 2010

hmm...maybe bringing her food mainly and a few gifts...like some rare plant he has access too...or harder to find herbs that she can plant.

little trinkets would be harder to keep certain parties from sniffing out.

oh he could get her some warmer clothes for when winter comes...or some clothes like the firerat for protection!

 

anyway I absolutely LOVE this series! they are SO CUTE!


PLEASE UPDATE SOON!


higan (Chapter 12) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

it would be cool if he had to get her a meal and make it all by him self. but it couldnt be simply extravagent it had to be over the top to prove that he thought of her more than as just mac and cheese.. he saw her as macaroni baked inthe oven w bacon and veggies and wagu beef and 100 year old truffles smothered w ancient cheese from some far and exotic place.

 

does that make sense?

well i love your story so far and i cant wait to see what u do to make it progress.. i will wait and fav this story to make sure i see all the updates.


Rissa (Chapter 12) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

I am in love with this story, i find it adorable and sweet and cant wait to read more.

As for my opinion in courting i would love either way maybe a little of both <,< not quite sure


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 9) - Thu 02 Sep 2010

awww...SO SWEET!

just love that Sessho was nuzzling her cheek! and he is definately a devoted dog huh?

 

anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

wonder how long until someone either a) tries to follow her to find out who she's meeting or b) something accidently slips or c) something I haven't thought of happens.


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 8) - Thu 02 Sep 2010

Awwww, poor Kagome!  Sango doesn't know what she's saying ;)  

Wonderful installment!  


knifethrower (Chapter 8) - Thu 02 Sep 2010

That was kind of funny!  But it's sad, because of InuYasha's mind games, it would be so easy to instill doubt in Kagome's mind, and destroy her self-confidence...


knifethrower (Chapter 7) - Thu 02 Sep 2010

Soooooo romantic!


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