You story line is a little choppy. Try evening it out a bit.

STOP THE BULLIES, HELP HER OPEN UP TO SESSHY!

finish the story pleeeease!!!!! i really love it!!!!

its a good story keep up the good work ^_^

well, Ayame is usually nice, so for a change, you could do her..

I am liking to flow of the storeh so far! ;] i think the main beyotch should be kikyo cuz i dont like her and that's reason enough :D

kikyo

Ok, these chapters need to be WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY longer!!!  I want to know what happens! Come on, come on - update!

~Sandreline

Make it Kagura, dammit! I hate Kikyo too, but Kagura definitely fits the role better, because she likes him in the anime.

Great story!

And as for the "beotch", I choose Kagura. Well, Ayame isn't THAT bad, and Kikyo has Inuyasha, right? ;]

Update soon! I really want to continue reading this ^^

in real life....kikyo and kagura should be pitied. i think ayame should be the stuck up, kikyo the beauty queen, kagura the girl whoms father abuses her. kikyo should also be cheer captain who is vain. ayame is bitch because she wants sesshomaru for herself. in honesty.....im told i look like kikyo so i would hate for her to be the bitch if you dont mind. love the story keep writing.

Kikyou. I don't hate her but the similarity in looks give SO many plot options and room to manover. Kagura would be my second choice because of her and Sesshomaru's chemistry in the series. Ayame last because her character just doesn't fit as bitchy to me.

Hmmm, can't wait to read the next installment.

And as for the biach, why not be unique? Make Kikyo a good girl for once, and use... say, for example, Kaguya (from the IY movie: Castle beyond the looking glass, I think). Or if it has to be one of those three, Kagura.

Kikyo as the biggest beotch... And I love your story........

ooh haha sess getting down to business kewl! please update ! kikyo should be the beezy kagura and ayame can be neutral

i wouldnt be able to say they are both bitches how about having them both be rival head bitches or something like that any ways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^

kikyo should be the bitch always has and always will be kagura will be good backup for kags shes got a pretty mouth w/ lots of ailor language and shes vicious too fite fire with fire!!

yay!! ive been waiting on you to update forever!!! i love your fanfic so far, please write more soon!! o and i think kikyo should be the bitch maby kagura could be like friend/aquaintance to kagome? i know she  and kagome didnt really interact much in the anime and when they did kagura wasn that fond of her but i think kagura and kagome would get along pretty good. even if kaguras still a bitch i think it would be 1 of the think kagome found amusing about her. not like the annoying hateful bitch i think kikyo id but like a funny hide-my-feelings kinda bitch. i probably sound confusing but you know what im tryin o say right?

p.s.~ the way you wrote sesshy was freakin awsome! so funny when he got to the school ,i loved it

I think maybe Kagura :)

Your FanFic is great by the wayyyy :D

boy kagome was scared! lol great job i cant wait till the next chapter