Not only have I had cramps that bad, but my father was the only person in the house but me! I was one embarrassed teenager.
On other things, this story is nice. I like stories that are not dark or have horrible amounts of drama, and other than that one Chiri chapter, this certainly fits the bill. This story is nicely in-character, and I haven't noticed any grammar or spelling errors. I absolutely love all of your stories. The only one that I haven't read is the pirate one, but the other ones are all fantastic. I really enjoy how you portray Sesshomaru's mother, and I wish you luck on your writing endeavors. (Sorry that I'm mentioning this here, but I doubt I'll write any more reviews for a while!)
Loveyaa (Chapter 35) - Tue 17 Jan 2012
Just an ordinary day in the future for those who are extraordinary in the past. Thanks for the heads up bout the (little) jumps in time. Hope everything is alright and wonder when the mom will notice (and what will come of that). I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Karli (Chapter 35) - Sun 15 Jan 2012
omg that was great i cant wait for you to post more!!!!
Loveyaa (Chapter 34) - Thu 29 Dec 2011
And baby makes 3. how old is Kagome again? I do think she is handling everything quite well since too much time hasn't passed. The fact that Sesshoumaru has gone baby crazy protective already (the second day...its gonna be a long pregnancy) is a little surprising and then again not at all. I can't wait to see what happens next when Sesshoumaru continues to protect his claim :)
I have commited a great crime, nay, travesty, by just now reading this work!!! It's so wonderful, I marathoned it and finished it in two days!!! I cannot wait for more, and I don't know how I missed it, I read your other work, the one about kago being Mama Inu's secretary and I find it absolutely delightful. Well that's what I get for not looking through your other works XD!! I hope you have wonderful holiday and can't wait to see you more from you.
koneji (Chapter 34) - Sat 17 Dec 2011
Why do I have a feeling that Hojo is coming up soon? I just love reading about the possessive aspects in fanfics! Keep up the amazing writing!
Nicka (Chapter 34) - Mon 12 Dec 2011
I absolutely love this story and i find myself reading the entire story everytime you update just to go on the adventure again. Pleas update soon.
Kula (Chapter 34) - Sun 04 Dec 2011
I just found your story today... I couldn't stop reading until I ran out of chapters. I love how the story is progressing, can't wait until the next chapter is posted.
Thank you
TKE (Chapter 34) - Sun 04 Dec 2011
Awesome update....pups,pups, and more pups!!!!!!
Lillian (Chapter 34) - Sun 04 Dec 2011
I am very excited for the next chapter! Possesomaru is quite exciting!
headalphafemale (Chapter 17) - Mon 28 Nov 2011
Excellent idea for the return of Sesshomaru's arm! Thank you, great writing!
Loveyaa (Chapter 33) - Thu 27 Oct 2011
You have yourself quite the story. I wonder if the dynamics of everything will change once again. It will be def interesting to see what changes, now that Kagome the alpha is mated to the alpha, and what won't change. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
I dont know why but ur rin is so much cuter than other stories without being a total sugar and sweet annoying stereotypical little girl. i really like it. i think you have a knack for her character
crescentqueen (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Oct 2011
| What a great story so far! I just wonder why you made Rin this way, speaking in 3rd person and as naive as most children. Is it because everyone here does that? I don't know about you but I've read all of the manga and watched all of the anime and movies, including the un-dubbed last episodes and no where did I find this Rin, or Sesshoumaru for that matter.
Rin doesn't speak that way and she's an incredibly brave, independant and bright little girl; very much like a smaller version of Kagome. And Sesshoumaru, he doesn't really speak in 3rd person all the time only sometimes like when he's making a statement and it's, "I, Sesshoumaru..." He does use people's names, he even calls Naraku, he's most hated enemy, by his name. These versions of Rin and Sesshoumaru was made up by fans.
Great job on the chapter. Love how you have written their relationship.
You can clearly tell how much they love each other. The affection they show towards one another is so cute! X3 I love it! You are an awesome writer. Can't wait for the next update.
Did not expect Sesshoumaru to be the tickle monster.
So, so sweet!
Oh, to have your own piece of Sesshomaru's Moko-Moko. Can you imagine?
Beautiful description of the ceremony and outfits. Wonderful job!
headalphafemale (Chapter 16) - Mon 03 Oct 2011
That was very cute, Sesshomaru wanting so badly to have Kagome to brush his hair, but not wanting to say a word about it. So Sesshomaru-like behavior. Thank you for your writing.
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