awww that was such a great ch. Ive been reading and been looking for the updates. but i never left a review. but tonight i wanted to tell you i really enjoy your this story and i will keep an eye out for it daily. thank you for your time.
I don't know why I haven't found this story until now. After spending all day (and early morning) catching up on it, I can honestly say that so far, it's one of the best I've read. A few grammatical and consistancy errors aside, the story has a nice flow, good pace, and believable plot. I also enjoy your portrayal of the characters, especially Sesshomaru and Jaken. Very interesting take.
On the subject of interesting takes, I've never read a story were Sesshomaru gets his arm back in that way. It was refreshing to say the least, as I'm sick of 'magical Kagome healing' that's prevelent in many other stories.
Your fic is a cool drink of water from a normally lukewarm tap. Can't wait to read more!
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 29) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
wow...just wow...ya know...I wouldn't be surprised if they get an earlier firstborn because of this meeting...I mean if now because Sesshomaru met future Kagome that he'll be impregnating his Kagome ealier and thus future Kagome has one more child then she did before meeting past Sesshomaru in the future. does that make sense? or in future Kagome's past did her mate meet the future version of her and their children? or did something else happen? this is confusing...I love it though.
I'm a bit surprised future Kagome seemingly isn't having any bodyguards or anything while she's in the city and heavily pupped and has 2 young pups with her...unless there are others of their pack around but in the shadows...
anyway totally LOVED THIS CHAPTER! loved the bit about both dealing with unwanted suitors and then the bit about him seeing some of his future pups.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Excellant chapter! Not what I expected but it would make sense that they would run into their future selves :)
REDWOLF (Chapter 29) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
Oh My....!@_@! Seventeenth and pregnant AGAIN! Oh, and she had to hold him back from having more! WOW! They have been busy. Hey, wouldn't it be strange if one of those three friends in her time is actually her future self's daughter? Mind boggling. This fic just keeps getting better and better. It fantastic. I wonder if her Mom knows the future Kagome?
Vrey (Chapter 29) - Wed 15 Jun 2011
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! so cute o.o
I'm sure if Sess had his way they weuld have closer to 500. LOL! The twist was good. I'm sure Sess is eager to start on their family and it cements the fact that Kagome is his. Now, will Hojo cause more problems?
Jamie (Chapter 29) - Wed 15 Jun 2011
UGH I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
it's so hard to wait for udpates now. Keep up the great work :)
You are a gifted artist and a wonderful writer to boot! I really like this story. I hope you update soon ^_^
Azurena (Chapter 28) - Tue 10 May 2011
Ahhh! I loved this chapter! Who wouldn't want to flaunt Sesshoumaru??? I seriously hope there's an encounter with Hojo. Just because hahaha
Please update soon!
Azurena (Chapter 27) - Tue 10 May 2011
Ooooooo I was feeling her pain!!! Lol whew! I have just started reading your story today, and I must say I love it! I was going to wait and review until the next chapter, but I just couldn't resist after reading about Kagome's . . . predicament :P It was like reading about myself, honestly.
On to the next chapter!!!
REDWOLF (Chapter 28) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
Oh, I hope they get rings :)
Dragoness (Chapter 28) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
Awww. What a great chapter. I also love the more affectionate Sesshomaru. I loved how you expained it and it is nice that he can relax away from prying eyes for awhile. Can't wait for the next update.
Nilee1 (Chapter 28) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
loved it--longer chapyers are great
Lia (Chapter 27) - Wed 27 Apr 2011
This is a very good story...no matter how much i try to stop reading I just end up getting hooked. Keep on working hard your doing amazing :D cant wait till the updates..
ThereIsWarInWomenToo (forgot my password) (Chapter 27) - Wed 20 Apr 2011
This has been an enjoyable read. While the one occasion of an author's note within the text of the fic itself was a bit jarring, and the use of a beta reader could improve some of the grammar mistakes and word confusion, it does not detract from the overall tone of the story. This is good fun, and the pack mentality it interestingly rendered.
Looking forward to seeing where it goes next. <3
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amy (Chapter 26) - Tue 19 Apr 2011
Great job, he was able to go with her!She will be safe!
Ive felt like that before, if only i had a sesshomaru to help me feel better!!! I like this chapter it was nice and fluffy!
Poor Kags. That's a tough thing to deal with, and I understand that completely. The question is, will she keep skirting the issue of Sess when she feels better or will she spill all?
Thatz (Chapter 26) - Sun 17 Apr 2011
love your story can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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