Oh My Goddess, this so naughty. I loved every second of it. Though why did you use a yogurt comparison? You messed with one of my favorite foods. I will never look at it again without naughty thoughts again. Though I loved this story big time.
So good, as always.
*fans self*
...please excuse me while I go to the grocery store. I have a very important item to buy!
Very well written, as always! How I missed this one, I have no idea!~Sandreline
WOW.:-$
wow!!! thats really all that i can say... WOW!!!
That was HOT!!
Ah R0o, I love your amazing writing and beautiful wordage! I could possitivly drown in your stories! And...for some reason I could go for some yogurt right now. XD
Thanks for writing this,
~Stormie
That was hot ^.^ Very good story
OMG dang will never look at yogert the same again!
Woah.
Someone should definitely do an artwork of the double sit scene hehe
This was great :] You did a wonderful job. I've never read anything like it.
(snerkgiggle)
the hunt for the jewel shards would be harder, his idiot brother would be stupider,
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!
Yum I like Yogurt a lot more all of a sudden...lol
I love this one.I think I read it before on AFF, but I'm not positive.
I really liked this oneshot. I think it would be great if you added on to it!!
i love your story i hope that you make a secound part to it
r0o. This was freaking hot. I love your darn lemons and I wish I could read a new one every day. Haha, unfortunately I am sure you have a life, but I am a big big fan and am so happy I have been reading your fanfics. I wish we could make a button that said, "Sesshoumaru has spoiled me for other lovers." =)
Thank Kami for GM roo's.
first off r0o I'm a big fan if not bigger. I simply adore your writing it leaves a refreshing taste to the senses, and your attention to detail is simply remarkable. The I've always read your stories but never had the courage to reply, simply because your work was amazing. However you've inspired me to become a writer in a sense of fiction. I thank you and please continue to write as my hunger for your written stories and your lemons leave my imagination happy. My review of your work
Writing detail 9
plot bunny 9.2 ( Yogurt who would have thought)
Grammer 10
Lemon 11 (Its really a ten but I've loved this lemon)
Dialogue 5 (There wasn't much but Its ok)
continuation Yes. Simply because I love the lemons you wrote in this one and I like to see more plot!!!!!
Lol you are amazing as always
Later
tori
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