Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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Paperwing (Chapter 359) - Wed 04 Apr 2018

Thanks for the update! I had to go back and re-read a few chapters to remember what was going on. Silly humans, jewels are for yokai! #trixareforkids


Dryft (Chapter 358) - Thu 29 Mar 2018

this story is so interesting and quite the twist on Rin OMG


almorilla (Chapter 358) - Sat 24 Feb 2018

Well this is a lot longer and more twisty than I had expected when I started it! Kudos my dear for keeping at it for so long. I hope you will actually finish this one day.


Lauren (Chapter 358) - Tue 20 Feb 2018

A sweet chpter! And a reveal of who that demon was. Yaa! They're so sweet and domestic. Now I smell trouble.

Glad you're feeling better.


raphaella (Chapter 46) - Mon 19 Feb 2018

Hi


Kairichan43 (Chapter 358) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Always get excited when I see this has been updated. Thank you for the new chapter, and I'm glad you are feeling better! 


Natalia (Chapter 358) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Aw so sweet. Great family. I love how shows that he cares.

Take care of yourself, stay strong.

ChreCh


Paperwing (Chapter 358) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Yay an update! Now mommy's peeking around huh? Hmmm... 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 357) - Sat 27 Jan 2018

I'm excited for the next chapter! Thanks for the update! 


Lauren (Chapter 357) - Fri 26 Jan 2018

Look at that! Shippo and Miroku are being influences already. At this rate, by two months, the kid will be speaking. He sounds adorable in this form too, by the way. Looking forward to a family dinner and cuddle time. And I can't wait to hear about that shadow guy. He's a link to Hoshishi and the Emperor, so that's terrible news for our couple. 

 

Sorry to hear that you have cooties. Hope you can run them off soon. Sending well wishes and Lysol. 


hw (Chapter 357) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

omg! Masamitsu is the cutest thing! Happy that he got his mothers' looks as well as his fathers'. Its so cute to see Sesshoumaru so proud of his son. And it looks like the kids are fast friends, lovely! I think Sesshoumaru will come to like Miroku, not just b/c he's Kagome's friend and trustworthy around her, but I think he'll come to appreciate him as a friend and ally. At the very least, he'll provide much amusement until he gets the hang of being yokai. hahahaha!

 


Paperwing (Chapter 357) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

I want to know about shadowy person too! And thank you for the update! I look forwards to more ungainly Miroku. 


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 357) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

As always, I bow before your work ethic and creativity... and ability to create WORDS! Such wonderful, meaningful WORDS!! The germs have come calling here as well and I have been borderline walking pneumonia for a week now. The hubby is making me work but the kids are threatening to take me to a hospital. Glad I got away from both long enough to enjoy this bit of goodness before they could do either! Now, need moar sleepies, liquids, fever-reducers & such... hope you feel better soonest!!

:D

~~me~~


Lauren (Chapter 356) - Mon 22 Jan 2018

Well, he's still a fast learner. At least there's that. And +1 on the uncle scoreboard for not making a noise that'd hurt the baby. 

 

What was that teaser for next chapter? Shippou doesn't feel like he belongs with the murderous puppy clan? I'm sure his little sister will show him how to perfect his stoic face.


hw (Chapter 356) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

LOL! Oh Miroku! A little soggy but he got the hang of it in the end. hahahaha!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 356) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

Oh, Miroku. The big lovely peacock. Sesshy shouldn’t be so hard on him. It’s his first transformation. Onward!


Paperwing (Chapter 356) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

I'm so glad you didn't try to pretend peacocks are in any way melodious. Too funny. 


Lauren (Chapter 355) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

I'm kind of surprised that Miroku has been brooding as much as he clearly has. So much that he didn't explore this new form he didn't want but is stuck with. Miroku has a long way to go, but again, I'm glad he has Kagome. They'll no doubt need to lean on each other more than ever, once they land at the fortress.


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

Amazing! Miroku is changing. And the new family is on the way home.  A big thank you for updating.  I love this fix and am so happy and excited you are continuing it. Thx for not giving up on it.

Take care!


hw (Chapter 355) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

Ohh! Yes! Miroku's transformation! He's gotta try to fly or atleast use a cloud of yoki like Sesshoumaru. Exciting, exciting!


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