Take it to her, Sesshy. She needs to be taught a lesson. I don't think Inu won't like beng human for long. But at least it'll teach him to think before he acts. Hope there is a romance between him and Sango. If there is a reunion between the Lord and Lady of the West and Inuyasha and Sango, I hope Sango gives Hoshihikari a good whack upsideher head with her Hiraikotsu, just for the hell of it. Onward!
Hey,
I love the way you wrote and constructed your story. It was amazing. So amazing that I missed 1 night of sleep just to finish it in one go :D
It just makes me so, so happy to see Kagome as an equal. And I love that you didn't let her show mercy on Sesshomarus mother. All that crap about forgiving someone who continiously tries to kill you and has the illest of intends towards you, doesn't make Kagome strong, it makes her weak. I'm a big fan of how you portrayed her. Also: the relationship developement with Sesshomaru is just perfect. How he learns to love again *waaaa* it's just really, really nicely done.
You see, I'm not capable of being constructive right now because I'm just so happy to have found a good, thrilling story.
Furthermore you made her question Sesshomaru and be protective of her pup (which I loved). The fact that she stood up for it and told him, that she got pregnant wasn't just her fault was so TRUE. I hate the fics in which she apologizes for every frickin' thing she has absolutely nothing to do with. Ohmmmm... I think I made my point so...
You can see how very happy I am to have found Alpha amongst the other storys here and I sincerely hope that you continue to update!
Lot's of Love,
Mara
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