Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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DemonQueen17 (Chapter 328) - Fri 28 Mar 2014

Ooooo, Grandma Inu is trouble with her mate. Let her have it, Miroku! Can't wait for the next chapter. Onward!


satuross (Chapter 327) - Fri 28 Mar 2014

wow thanks for an update.

 

i totally forgot this story exists. heh heh heh. maybe i should re-read the ruts after the fight 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 327) - Thu 27 Mar 2014

your evil
i♥you for it!
i misses you

more please


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 327) - Thu 27 Mar 2014

I don't think Sesshomaru's going to like what he might hear about the future especially with what Hoshihi sees in it. I kind of feel bad for him. Onward!


Treece (Chapter 326) - Thu 27 Feb 2014

Fantastic.  Awesome. Riveting. I don't know this is going but I am glad to follow.  Lead on!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 326) - Thu 27 Feb 2014

I can't get over Miroku calling Hoshihi Mendorichibi. A rather bitchy hen. LOL. Onward!!!!


Suka25 (Chapter 326) - Thu 27 Feb 2014

OOOOOOO! MORE PLEASE!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 326) - Thu 27 Feb 2014

pot then fire!

Love it!


Ankita (Chapter 326) - Thu 27 Feb 2014

phew finally finished it took me 3 days to complete this fanfic but I was really heartbroken when I read about miroku T_T poor sangooo I feel like killing miroku I still can't get over it the same way i feel about Inuyasha he lost kagome don't know why but i feel like kagome cheated on him while in most cases its the opposite ahh well I'm just happy she ended up with sessho atleast she is not seen weak or helpless here .... I hope there is a happy life for sango and inuyasha , sangoo really needs that T_T....
I wish kagome will atleast beat miroku when she learns he hurt her while he was human and knew nothing about his dark side....T_T poor sangooooooooooo 


Anonymous (Chapter 17) - Wed 26 Feb 2014

Who the fuck wants a 300 word story. I've written captions longer than this shit


Suka25 (Chapter 324) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

OOOOOOOOO Sesshoumaru is pissed!!!!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 324) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

*flails happily and flopps about*


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 324) - Wed 19 Feb 2014

Grandma Inu's in serious trouble. She better divulge ALL her secrets if she wants to stay in one piece. Onward!


Dee (Chapter 324) - Wed 19 Feb 2014

MOAR!!!!! So good! Omigosh!!


Dee (Chapter 283) - Wed 19 Feb 2014

YUUUUUSSSS


burgundyburning (Chapter 324) - Tue 18 Feb 2014

This chapter made me clap my hands in excitement like a little child, how wonderfully suspenseful! Your return is most welcome, and I can't wait for more!


Dee (Chapter 225) - Tue 18 Feb 2014

FULL CIRCLE!!! oh I LOVE IT!!!!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 323) - Mon 17 Feb 2014

I really feel bad for Sesshy. Hoshihikari better explain everything if she wants to continue breathing. Onward!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 322) - Mon 17 Feb 2014

Take it to her, Sesshy. She needs to be taught a lesson. I don't think Inu won't like beng human for long. But at least it'll teach him to think before he acts. Hope there is a romance between him and Sango. If there is a reunion between the Lord and Lady of the West and Inuyasha and Sango, I hope Sango gives Hoshihikari a good whack upsideher head with her Hiraikotsu, just for the hell of it. Onward!


I'm absolutely thrilled to see what happens next! (Chapter 321) - Wed 04 Dec 2013

Hey,

I love the way you wrote and constructed your story. It was amazing. So amazing that I missed 1 night of sleep just to finish it in one go :D


It just makes me so, so happy to see Kagome as an equal. And I love that you didn't let her show mercy on Sesshomarus mother.
All that crap about forgiving someone who continiously tries to kill you and has the illest of intends towards you, doesn't make Kagome strong, it makes her weak. I'm a big fan of how you portrayed her. Also: the relationship developement with Sesshomaru is just perfect. How he learns to love again *waaaa* it's just really, really nicely done.

You see, I'm not capable of being constructive right now because I'm just so happy to have found a good, thrilling story.

Furthermore you made her question Sesshomaru and be protective of her pup (which I loved). The fact that she stood up for it and told him, that she got pregnant wasn't just her fault was so TRUE. I hate the fics in which she apologizes for every frickin' thing she has absolutely nothing to do with. Ohmmmm... I think I made my point so...


You can see how very happy I am to have found Alpha amongst the other storys here and I sincerely hope that you continue to update!

 

Lot's of Love,

Mara

 


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