Beautiful chapter as always! I love the exploration that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are doing with each other. Her true caring nature is enveloping Shsshoumaru is a warm, loving and trusting embrace that he doesn't seem to fully comprehend yet. He still thinks he'll be able to leave her and all they have shared in the end and go back to the way things were. What he doesn't understand is that they have both changed each others lives to much to ever go back. OMG that scene with Kagome's mother was so intense but that was a long time in coming. I know many painful things were said but surpressing those kinds of emotions for long periods of time are truly detrimental on one's mind and body. I hope her mother will come to understand this. I'm glad that your continuing on with this fic! As all your others I abolutely love it!!
Ahhhh! What an update! As I told you before, only you can deliver with this style and passion, and boy, did you deliver!
Glorious update! Droped everything to rush and begin reading, and was most happy about everything! I am still trying to figure out how you did it, but you managed to make the scene in the shower sensual, and tender, loving, sweet, warm, and sexy alltogether! It was perfect! Loved every moment of it, and I am glad you didn't rush them into anything they were not ready for.
Nodoka is becoming one of those characters you don't want to hate, but it's so easy to dislike! Her snooping around and trying to control every aspect of Kagome's life makes me dislike her so very much! Kagome's words may have been harsh, but I think they were necessary, after all, how much more can she take? Her mother needs to understand that Kagome is no longer a little girl that needs her mother to tell her what to wear,what to eat, what to say and do at every moment of the day. Kagome has wings and needs to learn how to use them, and for that she needs room and a little bit of freedom!
Surprised me there with Totosai being his godfather! I knew they knew each other, but never imagined the connection! Perfect! Just perfect!
Sesshomaru's reluctance to allow room for growth between him and Kagome is cause for concern, but knowing you, there is much more than meets the eye waiting for us around the corner, so I will be a good fan and await for your updates to see what evil machinations you come up with to torture our souls! Hahahahaha!! *Evil Laugh*
Love you much, hughs to you and Mana (Hi Mana!), and remember that there is much love in this world for you and your writing!
P.L.U.R!
PS: PLEASE! Update soon again! (Had to say it, what kind of a reader would I be if I didn't beg for another update?)
Selazul (Chapter 13) - Mon 09 Jan 2012
Ugh I know the confrontation chapter is coming up >_< can we have some more snippets of sweet fluff and smut before sessh reveals all?
I loved this chapter. The girl talk really cracked me up. "Sometimes I think men are convinced dismantling a bomb would be easier.” I laughed so hard when I read that my hubby asked me if I was alright. LOL
Even though he is still being the arrogant prick, I think that he is beginning to have deeper feelings for her than he realizes. Even though his words are saying one thing, his actions are saying something totally different. I wonder if he will still be trying to convince himself that she won't fit into his world when the time comes.
Awesome chapter!
Loveyaa (Chapter 13) - Mon 09 Jan 2012
A different kind of bonding took place in this chapter. A lot of different kind(s) of emtion took place and I think you did a splendid job showing it. I wonder what will beome of kagome and Sesshoumaru and the whole troupee. What other troubles will come their way. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
I have to say I think I just might be an addict when it comes to reading your stories!! I just can't get enough of them!! As soon as the chapter ends I want more right way! That's how you know the author is good!! I wonder if Sesshoumaru will really be able to walk away from Kagome in 4 months time. They share so much already and even if he doesn't realize it yet he trusts her. I wonder if he'll be able to betray her trust, especially after that last seen. She truly cares for him and wants to take care of him. Very real, very intense emotions have a way of changing everything we think we want or hold dear. As always I can't wait for more!
I'm so horribly addicted to your fiction :3
I love you. I love you. I love you. :) Did I mention I loved you? Haha, this story is a truly eye opening exprience for me. Recently we went and watched a troupe perform, I got some great video and since I've wondered what goes through their heads to get that look of peace on their faces. Thank you for putting your story online and allowing me to actually get inside of a fire spinner and see the work that goes into it. Truly your story has had a great plot, and has had me captivated since I first started reading it. Please please update it ;)
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