Wow! That was well worth the wait. Two very erotic make out scenes! I love it!
I love the developing relationship between them and the fact that he is starting to feel even more guilty at the thought of ending things with her. I also like how you are bringing Izayoi into the story and how Kagome felt bad for lying so she told him. You characters are so well developed that it is easy to empathize with them. It's a little easier to get into Kagome's mind set, but I'm starting to get a better grasp on Sesshoumaru as your story progresses.
Oh....wow.....that was....wow. Someone likes to take risks, but then with what they do with fire you would have to like to take risks, right?
I love how the 'non-relationship' thing is progressing. The developement of Kagome and Sesshomaru and their growing closeness as he initiates her into new territory is really nicely done. I just hate to see things fall apart, not just their relationship, but the group as a whole.
Until that happens, I've really enjoyed this story. Update when the creativity flows!
I love this story! I started it this morning and read all day ignoring all the housework I needed to be doing in favor of reading.
I was quickly drawn into the story. I love the interactions between the characters and how believable the developing relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is. I like the fact that you have decided to include aspects from the manga such as Sesshoumaru's missing arm. I also really like your humor and sarcasm (sarcasm is like my second language LOL)
To my knowledge I had never heard of fire spinners and now find myself wishing to see a live performance. When it was first mentioned at the beginning of your story all I could think of were the people who breath the fire, but then I followed your advice and looked it up on youtube. It is amazing.
Great Job and thank you for the awesome read! I'm really enjoying it.
yasurei (Chapter 11) - Mon 12 Dec 2011
Damn, you´re an amazing writer and I loved this chapter which was mostly about friendship and relationships in general. Kouga is a great guy and he really completes the group. The idea with the tatoo was also great. Though me and my friends got our tatoos at different times I can see the appeal in getting some as a group especially if you want to remember an important time in your life.
I love the maturity at how they approach a relationship, never been a fan of all the theatralics, drama and angsting for which young people are famous for. Sure, when you´re in a deep relationship these emotions will come automatically but a certain levelheadedness is always appreciated.
Haha! I about rolled off my bed laughing at Kagome's cruel joke on Kouga and Inuyashs!
Sesshomaru needs to stop thinking about relationships as temporary. :pouts:
Thanks for writing!
yasurei (Chapter 10) - Thu 01 Dec 2011
I love how you gave Kouga a personality, other writers just make him an idiot who first loves Kagome and then ends up with Ayame but there is so much more to his real character. Even in the manga he had a strange friendship with Inuyasha based on their love for Kagome so I´m glad that he is friends with Inuyasha here as well. How come no one else blamed Ayame, it´s obvious that her role was big in what happened. I´ll never understand why she was created for the anime, she´s such an annoying character.
Kujaku is in love with Kagome, isn´t she? I feel sorry for her, Kagome is neglecting her friend for her newer ones. While I´ve never been a big fan of Sango, Kujaku seemed to be interesting.
Update soon....I hope the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome will build into something more
Awesome update - great work on bringing in Izayoi and her involvement in the group. It's not surprising that Sesshomaru is putting things together..it's just trying to figure out who it is that is helping them all out.
With all of the excitement of Kagome getting a full ride and Kouga re-joining the group, I'm wondering when the other shoe will drop...just sayin....
Phoenix89 (Chapter 10) - Mon 28 Nov 2011
I need more. More. More. MORE.
Booyaka! Kouga! :laughs: And that makes... two to whom Kagome's told of the troupe's make-up artist's mistake? :giggles:
All that funny aside... what REALLY had me in stitches was Sesshomaru's unspoken thoughts about why he was really letting Kouga back in the troupe. Once read it totally made sense, but for some reason I wasn't expecting it and therefore it hit me hard and humorous.
Thanks so much for writing!
That was AWESOME! I love how this is progressing. You managed to do something nice with that, um, misunderstanding which is great. Thanks for not drawing the distance between them out.
LOVED the red burn. And the resulting capitulating to romance. :giggles: So.... Sesshomaru's going to be torn about wanting to lift that ban against dating within the troupe now I'm sure.
Thanks so much for writing!
Phoenix89 (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Nov 2011
Forget your birthday!!!! Just kidding! I need more, we ALL need more. You can't just leave us with only that?!
Anon (Chapter 8) - Sun 20 Nov 2011
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh there's not another chapter!!!! MORE!!!!
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