Ooooh, things are progressing steadily :D I like where (and how) this is going. And, you really give her everything she's due, many downplay her power.

~lily

Liked it =) She has her demons, but then, everyone does. And Sango <3<3<3<3.... We finally get to see more of her, I think it'll do her good to fight. 

~lily

Awesome. I like the story, and especially the fact that Kagome is not some weak-willed, depressive girl who does nothing but mope around. Most writers that have her as a victim either make her too broken and weak for the real Kag, or they make it that it just bounces off her (at least what I've read so far). I think you portray her just about perfectly, enough hurt and weaknes and enough strength. She is a strong girl.

And something is going on with Sessh...

~lily

Wow! This story is fantastic! I stumbled on it yesterday, and I'm frankly impressed!

Usually I don't go for dark and drama, but this one is very well written. Fabulous work! One of the best Sesshoumaru's portraits I ever seen.

Congratulations, and I'm dying for the next chapter!

=D

update plz!!

This story is enthralling.  I love it, and I am seriously looking forward to reading more.

BUT - I would like to point out that in chapter 2...the whole chapter starts over about half way through.... right after your author's note... you might want to fix that.