*his lip curls, his stomach churns, he stands up and turns on his heel... and runs for dear life*
Because love is for GIRLS.
I'm sorry, I have no idea why that came out. I think it was the desperation I sensed in the last sentence, the utter disbelief. Such a cute chapter.
I always envy people that can convey so much in so few words, which you have done fabulously. I do believe 'hook,line and sinker' is appropriate in my case. Can't wait for another update.
Zalika (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 Nov 2011
Looks to be a very promising cute story...can't wait to see what happens next.
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