Yes. This is a very kinky piece of fanfic, indeed. Quite a few scenes of smut which is totally HOT! ( ;
O.O.... Are you Santa Claus? I mean, the presents just keep appearing this Christmas-chapter after chapter after chapter. Anyway, I understood some of the medical jargon right off the bat, (studying to be a CRNA) but some of it I had to stop and reread to realize what you were talking about. It made me feel like I needed to study some more and I'm supposed to be on break, ugh. I loved the revelation that even though Kagome is a good surgeon, it isn't all sunshine and rainbows for her, that she can't save everyone and it showed that it does affected her as well. The little tidbit about her father was a nice addition, right along with Sesshoumaru's therapy. Now, I feel the girl talk with Sango was a great bit of therapy in terms of getting it off of Kagome's chest. The drunken masturbation session was unique and amusing. I'm glad that Sango was able to understand and reassure her in a way most probably wouldn't as she is the newly revealed pervert married to the well known pervert. It actually makes sense for them to be on the same level in terms of things like that, because if not, I'm sure issues would arise later on. Anyway, enough of my rambling, I am thoroughly in love with this and I'm gearing up for the next part. Whoo hoo.
--Kaminoko
OK... that was pretty hot. Mmm, my perverted little mind is running amok with possibiliteis. Bring on the kink!
That was so very depressing. I look forward to reading more.
you are LUCKY! I logged in just to review this story.. LOVE IT.. want more.. soooooooooon
and <3 Pagan heathens.. i am one myself.. though i celebrate the christmas because the rest of my family is pretty christian. xD
Jay_chAn (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
I have been reading this story since you posted it, but my phone doesn't let me review so I finally got on
and now I can tell you what a wonderful job you've done! Of course Kagome would feel emotional she's with Inuyasha and
just had sex with his brother. Poor thing ;) haha! But you as a writer had me hooked and I can't wait for more! But I wonder if you will only be
showing Kagomes life Third Person POV in this story or will you also show Sesshomaru?
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
Great! Hot!
Selazul (Chapter 3) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
Made my day :) more soon please
Yes! Yes! Yes! I woke up and proceeded with my daily ritual of reading until I am ready to leave the bed and found this wonderful little gem had been updated. TWICE! Ohh Merry Merry Merry Christmas to me, A very very Happy Holiday Muwahahaha. I enjoyed these chapters immensely; already the drama ensues. Ooooooh, Kagome's reservations about her encounter with Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha's suspicious actions, and Sesshoumaru's reactions and feelings towards their one night of fantasy and Kagome herself are all making for fanfiction gold. I feel like I hit the jackpot when I found this yesterday, and now I feel like it is swiftly becoming a story that I will not be able to forget the details about if a long break were to be taken, resulting in a recap reread. I eagerly await the next installment, and the one after that, and the one after that, and the one after that.
Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays
--Kaminoko
Seriously? I LOVE THIS! I MUST HAVE MORE!
awe the poor miko! but that was HOT!
lol why is everything my fault? not that i mind a good GM is ALWAYS a welcomed thing!
This story just feels like it's going to be extraordinary. I have never come across those words in the list, actions howev....eyeah moving on >.> but I feel thoroughly educated afterward reading. My mind is just spinning with all the ideas about where this could go and where I am hoping this will go. All the drama that could ensue from Inuyasha's one request and Kagome's ultimatum is just...... I can't even describe the swelling in my chest from the excitement at the prospects of the type of fallout and newly awakened curiosity/wants that this will create.
I was going to beg and plead for a swift addition to this story but tomorrow is Christmas and I assume you will be busy/occupied with others or with relaxing, so instead I will beg and plead for a swift update at your earliest convenience after Christmas. Ohhhhh, *squeals* I can’t wait for the smut to occur and the drama to start and then more smut and more drama and romance and darn it, I’m literally shaking with anticipation. I need to go find something else to do before I explode from this mounting anticipation.
~I throw myself down at your feet, ignoring the burning pain from my throbbing chest that bore the weight of my graceless fall. Swiftly snaking my trembling arms around your ankle with unusual strength, I cling to you desperately. “Please! Please, don’t forget me here. Please don’t forget I’m waiting. I beg you with all that I am.” I glance up at your face, tears lining my lids as my pitiful form fiercely clutches at your limb. “Please return and update…..”
Waiting,
--Kaminoko
Shinya (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Dec 2011
I am ALWAYS happy to read anything of yours, and happy to see new stories. I love your writng style overall, and from what I've seen you handle "outside the norm" very well (I base that in part on your treatment of Kagome and Sesshoumaru in "Undenied" - which I love). Looking forward to seeing more of this new one!
Normally I'm a little cautious at reading fics classified as 'kink' but you've done it in such an intelligent, classy way that I enjoyed your first chapter & look forward to future updates. Nothing wrong with educating oneself about various kinks of others out there; I knew what zentai was by the look of it but didn't realize the actual terminology for it. I think we all need a Miroku in our lives ;) I find your writing enjoyable (been reading Convival) & I look forward to more postings!
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