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stormbringer246 (Chapter 10) - Tue 03 Jul 2012

So, I think you have a list of my (or common) kinks and passing interests and bottled them up into one fanfic. In short: this is amazing in everything from the plot how it smoothy connects from one arc to the next (because so far I'm dubbing it: Kagome finds partner and world falls apart arc, Kagome goes out with future in-laws and feels confused arc, then Kagome becaumes a sexual deviant arc) to sweet moments, to the kinky and sensual ones. I know you mentioned that you were worried about how the Sango+Kagome thing would go over, but personally I agree that it can be seen as a next logical step, especially considering Inuyasha's persistant absence and Kagome's new-found sexual confidance.

I spent the good of the majority of the day powering through all the chapters, and I'm a bit sad that it's been a while since the last update. However, I totally understand how life and the muse for other fics can get in the way (since I totally also read a lot of your other work (mostly on ff.net) and need to quit being a lame-o and start leaving more reviews). I hope at some point this fic might be continued, but take care of life and stuff first.


AP (Chapter 10) - Wed 28 Mar 2012

You should take this up a notch ;)


Raythe (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Mar 2012

Aww, thank you for mentioning me! It was nothing really, I just had to draw those scenes. But I got to ask...WHEN YOU UPDATING AGAIN!?!?! You update your other stories, don't you like this one anymore? Don't tell me someone else got you down on this one 'cause I've been waiting for an update forever. It's so good! Come back, come baaaack!!! Do you need me to draw more?


chanda (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

on hiatus :'''~{{  wahhhhhhhhh you have addictied me ok ok i can't spell.  pleeeeeeeeeeese i neeeeed to know what happens.


Brittany (Chapter 10) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

I like this story. It written well and its detailed it draws me in and I just have to keep reading. Please update soon.


Orang3Luv3r (Chapter 10) - Wed 29 Feb 2012

Love this story!! I hope you update soon :) Can't wait to see what happens!!


Rue_Flower (Chapter 10) - Sun 12 Feb 2012

I just want to say that you are AMAZING! I read all of your fanfiction and it's always amazing to read. I don't write myself but it is always good to find someone who has your talent. I'm waiting with bated breath for your next chapters!

Lot of love for you!


Please Finish I love this!!! (Chapter 10) - Fri 10 Feb 2012

lashon (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Feb 2012

i cant beleive i just now found this story! its great and i lovvee it sooooo much! i usually dont like girl on girl.. but its well written & your story is just really comfortable!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Feb 2012

Hey! It can't be ALL Lemons if you want anything resembling a plot. I'm glad you're going for some plot. :nods: Makes it all tie together better.

Something I've been thinking about off and on since reading one of your author's notes... you mentioned that Inuyasha is not cheeting... but then what IS he doing?!? :headdesks: Surely he can't really be just doing things for the company like is claimed. That makes no sense at all! Not with the way he's totally ignoring Kagome and being almost completely absent.

I can see their breakup in the horizon and I can only hope it's a fairly mutual one. At least... I HOPE they break it off before the wedding! Surely Kagome will realize that's best before they go through with it!

hm... speaking of Inuyasha... I wonder what HIS big hurrah was. Maybe That has something to do with why he's absent so much? :pouts: Now I'm exponencially curious about it.

Thanks so much for writing!


Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

I'd just like to let you know that I check dokuga everyday to see if you've updated.  Take as long as you need between chapters and remember that we all wouldn't be reading this if we didn't want to know what YOU thought, what You would have the characters do, Your story and Your own ending.  


QuothTheDragon (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

You, woman, are such a tease!!! I'm also squirming uncomfortably at the thought of that piercing lol. I really was looking forward to a little more character development (...and lemony goodness), but I'll be patient and wait for the next. 

Though I am grateful you didn't go with the first draft you told me about =P 

 

Awaiting breathlessly,

-Quoth


gradualwisd0m (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

Sometimes a break from the lemons is okay. I think you did a great job highlighting the trust & intimacy behind such a piercing. I feel you do such a great job being accurate yet not sterile or bland with your plot ideas that I enjoy your updates whether there are lemons or not. I like your Author Notes at the end, too, that give additional or clarifying information. I can't help noticing we haven't seen or heard from Inuyasha in a while though! 


RubyJeweler (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

F*** the damn flamer! (Gods, I'm freaken outraged.) Making you lose precious time, when we could've read this lovely update sooner. TT.TT I hate flamers. If they don't like a fic, because it's not driving towards what they think is the right way, then they shouldn't review. It's your story plot, and you have the right to do whatever the hell you want with the storyline. Keep it going the way you want, because I find this fic to be very enrapturing. I know that, in real life, cheating on your partner is considered atrocious, BUT! This is a fanfiction, which is fiction. Obvious, much?

The Hatter Theory, or may I call you Hatter? :D Please do not mind my rant about flamers in the above. I am merely reminding and emphasizing the point, to anyone who may want to leave a mindless flame, that everything in the fanfiction world is considered fictional. Even though it may relate to real situations, it still does not change the fact that Sesshomaru and Kagome are not real. Therefore, the plot/storyline pertaining to them is not real. With that pissed off note, I leave your story with love. I love you AND your fics. Remember that you still have your fans supporting you and your fabulous fics, and hopefully that will lift your spirits. Gosh, this is my longest review to any story! Oh well, now you have the privilege of being my first! Lol. Not in that way, of course. Hahaha...Please keep your updates coming. Btw, if you find me to be lacking in reviews, it's because I've been quite busy lately. ^.O

A fan,

RubyJeweler


criticat (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

Ouchies! I was not expecting that :)

I wonder what Inuyasha has been up to? Haven't seen him for a while (which is not a bad thing) but so curious!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Feb 2012

Naughty! Naughty hat! more please! and i still think inuyasha is cheating too.


yume (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Feb 2012
OMG.. i love your story ><..... kink is good xDD

NightQueen (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Feb 2012

Oh! WOW!! I'm totally so not sure I could ever do something like that! Ah I guess that's what Fantasies and Fanfiction are for!! LOL By the end of the chapter I really felt bad for Kagome.  She thinks or (knows) her relationship with Sesshoumaru is going to end in the near future and her feeling of guilt are going to start and eat away at her.  I wonder what's going on with Inuyasha? Hmm, the suspence is killing me! I so love your stories!!!!


Saraniya (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Feb 2012

I want her to break up with Inuyasha already!!!!! Sorry if I sound like a brat but those feelings of melacholy were stirred up quite well with this chapter and you show how well they fit together as couples. The relationship between Sesshoumaru and Miroku is such an interesting combination that works well when its put together correctly. Hats off for doing a good job once again. 


Zyren (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Feb 2012

As always I love you. Forget flames! I will never understand people who willingly continue reading things that obviouspy bother them. Anywho the Kagome/Sango action was a bit unexpected but quite erotic and not at all unwelcome. The VH piercing was....random, but I'm anxious to see what you do with that little detail. And where is InuYasha through all this?! I'm so desperate to know what's going to happen and what's going on with him in particular. But anyway hope all is well and I can't wait for the next chapter!


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