I liked this chapter.... I agree, though, that it does seem to miss.... something.... but really,it is a good chapter and story. I can't wait to see where you take it. :)

This is such a fabulous story!

Keep it coming.

;_: That's so sad. And Inuyasha is being a prick. I hope Sesshoumaru keeps visiting, if not more often. Why was he gone so long? Cause he was angery she was pregnant with Inuyasha's baby? Something else.

Well love  your fic so far and can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

Keep it coming.

I like this not happy ever after with inu.  to me it shows the cracks, insecuries and saddnes growing btwn the two.  Also how the children would have be affected.  hope to see more soon.

Well, Sesshoumaru obviously wants to court Kagome, and I don't know if it's just Inuyasha's ignorance of his own heritage, or if he's being an ass, but apparently Kagome and him are NOT mated as Kagome thinks (if I'm reading in between the lines correctly). Also, I wasn't too happy with Inuyasha when he came back just to rut with her, and it was a rut since all he did was undress her, take off his pants, and not allowed any touching. Is something going on with Inuyasha that we don't yet know about? Will poor Kagome be betrayed by Inu?

continue!!

Very good story. You did mention that Kikyo was dead. I wonder if that is where InuYasha has been going? Can't wait for the next update.

I'm enjoying this story.  I'm guessing Inuyasha has a female or two on the side. Poor Kagome and poor Sesshoumaru.  How long til he makes Inu spill his dirty secrets?  Doesn't Kagome question Inuyasha about his whereabouts?  Just wondering.  Please update soon!

~~I hope he doesn't break it!! >X(     This makes me feel anxious...  And I can't help but feel bad for Sesshy. T___T

Inuyasha's feeling a bit bitter, huh?  Can't wait to see where you take this!