a show of dominance. yep, it's all good.
This was way too adorable. Y'know it reminds me of another fanfic author here who has some seriously hillarious Inuyasha 'WTF' moments. They come at the greatest time and you just can't help but burst out laughing from his reactions. It's pretty canon like for him to blow up.
I like that you have an already unspoken companion-like comfort to them, there's no need to always explain that. Especially in something you consider to be a one shot. It totally works.
The moment I think all the blood drained from MY face was the moment she kicked him. I'm thinkin' 'ah, this a crackfic cause she 'bout to get murdered!!' lol I too like that even AFTER she did it, she didn't cower and they just pretty much wrestled.
Too cute and the smirk and kiss at the end sure made them seem much more mature then the rest. Maybe.. lol
Still, Inuyasha WTF's are super funny. LOVE. THEM. XD
TKE (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
Oh man, I love Kagome! She's such a spitfire!!!
Oh my gosh lol, I just love inuyashain this: "seriously WTF?!" lol you did a great job! And how kagome kicked sesshomaru in the ass, I would LOVE to have seen his face in reality. Lol great job on this ^.^
I love it! Your transition from humor to seriousness was perfect! I usually don't read one-shots, but this is by far one of my favorites! Continue if you wish to do so, I will be a loyal reader. :)
That was so cute!
Haha poor Inuyasha!
(Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
Thanks soooooo much for the reviews so far!!! I'm shocked at how many reads I've gotten since posting this! 121 reads in barely 3 hours! WOOT! Logan, keep checking up...I'll try my best to make this a series, but I've got my hands full playing catch up from my long hiatus with my other fics. Thanks again, guys!
HUGS & PUPPY LOVE,
~InuAtashi
Charlene (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
Good one!
logan (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SOOOOOOO WANNA KNOW HOW IT ENDS!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE WITH SOMETHING FOR THIS, I SOOO DIED READING THIS!!!! ^_^
I love it. Lol And I can so see it happening.
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