Sesshomaru in character indeed! I'm positively thrilled about the begining of your story, your writing is superb and your Kagome is very good too, still herself but with a deep undertone of sadness. I hope despair will not eat too much at her oh so pure soul. Please update soo! Dewa mata

i really hope you write in what's going on w/ everybody else and exactly what happened that made Kagome leave...

I agree with Possessed and several of the other readers. I really appreciate how much you've kept Sesshomaru in character. Often, authors state that they too, have kept Sesshomaru's character correct, but as you portrayed so nicely, his words are always minimal and purposeful. Never would he flounder with his words in order to comfort Kagome, no matter what respect or fear-of-tears that he might have. He simply isn't one to lie even for the sake of comforting someone. I really like that aspect of this story. Keep up the good work. Till next time...

I like the character you are building with Sesshoumaru. You have kept his comments clear and concise, as they should be.

Really intriguing story-line,but you have to update ASAP -- I'm hooked! What happened to Kagome? And I like the Sesshoumaru portrayal -- very good. Please update!

the whole group abandoned her? idiots. complete idiots...I honestly can't believe that Shippo would have abandoned her though....hmmm...btw, this part here [And the Taiyoukai was a just man, whatever else he was] ya might wanna change to "The Taiyoukai was a just male" since he isn't technically a "man". PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This is really great so far. I am really looking forward to how Kagome's future develops and how Sesshoumaru filters into it. Please update soon!

as much as i like how you could write how kagome feels and such w/out telling the cause, it's annoying and now i'm hooked, update soon!!!

I like your style and I am intrigued. I will resist the urge to read further on ff.

interesting. I'm wondering how all screwed up. If it was Inuyasha I hope she sits him to hell. ^.^

Oh, nice teaser. Sounds like it's going to evolve into a great story! Hope to read more from you soon!

Can't wait to find out what happens next. Nice writing style.

This is interesting, I can't wait for the update. :)

Ah... it's intriguing and well witten. Please, keep on the good job! Dewa mata XD

omg i love this story i already read most of it on fanfiction so im just waiting for the update there but i really like ur story

wow what a beginning , I look forward to future chapters

so far so good. it's already captured my intention. More chapters :)

i agree with hikari hime. this was very well written and thought out. i can tell that you (either knowingly or not) designed your writting to draw the reader in with mystery and a sense of a fracture in the foundation of a characters mould. when you start out having kagome, one whom is generally bubbly and happy, solemn and self-degrading this definately draws a reader in. i do so wish to find out where you take this story. i look forward to your future updates. till then...