The scenes with Miroku and Sango were really wonderful. It was written and woven into the story beautifully. I really like the idea of Yasuhiro as a kelpie. Certainly there must be an Asian version of kelpies somewhere. Most legends are universal even if they wear different clothes. Looking forward to seeing how it all works out. 

This story just keeps getting better. Now we have a few more curves thrown in. 

That was quite nice and very steamy. Loved this chapter. Okay I usually restrain my self from grammar rants but this one seems to be a recurring problem with a lot of fic writers. Bare is like bare skin or bare your soul to someone. Bear is to carry something, like a child. This one gets mixed up a lot. Oh spelling error: complaint is like complaining about something; she had no complaint about the room. Compliant is to what you meant when Kagome'a body became soft against Sesshomaru's chest. I know you are done writing and editing and I won't do another grammar rant...I promise. 

Great chapter! I love Rin and I always love it when she's in the story. Love the interplay between our favorite couple and how they are progressing. 

Chap 12-14: I really enjoyed how you have the different side stories going on. 

The last two chapters have been fun to read. Her interaction with Haru and getting used to a little pampering is sweet. I really like the slow interplay between Sessh and Kagome. Not too rushed and nicely building. 

I'm really enjoying this story. The side story with Sai is interesting and I'm looking forward to how you develop it. Loved the stalking of his prey in this chapter. 

Ok, read this story all the way through, from start to finish in four days....So I've been thoroughly distracted from school work. Now that I've finished this well written, captivating story I hope to return to the land of the responsible and finish my work. Until I start one of your other works,

JA NE!

I love this story all though it seamead to jump from one part to another i srill liked it 2 thumgs up for a great story.

Ha this writer has awesome guts. I read the AN to the end. Lol I love her officially. I wonder if maybe Yasuhiro might end up with Haru instead. As long as Sesshomaru gets his girl, its all good in my hood. I just hope Miroku learns a lesson

This story was awesome and amazing, and it had a beautiful ending!

Awwwwww!!! Its over:-( Good story...

She better stop denying all that sexy!

Awe, I'm so sad it's over, but it was wonderful. Beautiful story!!!

I enjoyed each and every chapter!!!! Great story!!!

Beautiful ending! I love it. I am sad I won't be able wait patiently for the next chapter. Lol looking forward to your next story!!! ;)

i really enjoyed this story . the  very cute end

i really enjoyed this story . the  very cute end

i realli enjoyed this story . the  very cute end

This is so sad!  I always looked forward to an update.  I would drop what I was doing and read.  It was a fantastic story!  One of my all time favourites!  I look forward to reading more of your works. 

Excuse me, I'm going to sulk in a corner.