loved it like always thanks.
I'm a big fan of Knight Rider, oils and new, so I squealed (my brother's ears are my witnesses) in excitement and was even more excited to read your story. I hope you update because and I would love to read more.
Write lots and Have fun! ~Sy
I can't help but feel you should have left out him finding out about her past till later. Everything else is great, you need a beta though. Got a few grammar mistakes. Not my kind of story though.
mari (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 May 2013
loved the update thanks.
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