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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 May 2013

Keep it coming.


Faux66 (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 May 2013

What ii missed two very exciting chapters!!!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 16) - Sat 25 May 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 16) - Fri 24 May 2013

i loved the update thanks.


phoenixblueflame (Chapter 16) - Fri 24 May 2013

Loooooooooovvvvvvveeeeeee it I can't wait to see what happens next sadly I'm very impatient but if I have to wait for the next chapter I will even tho it will annoy me I will wait :) ^-^


mari (Chapter 15) - Wed 08 May 2013

loved it geeting good thanks.


Faux66 (Chapter 15) - Wed 08 May 2013

Aaahhhhh too excited


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 15) - Wed 08 May 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 14) - Wed 08 May 2013

great update loved it.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 14) - Tue 07 May 2013

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 14) - Tue 07 May 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 13) - Tue 07 May 2013

great chapter loved it.


mari (Chapter 12) - Tue 07 May 2013

LOVED it thanks cant wait for the next chapter.


*~*Missy*~* (Chapter 12) - Tue 07 May 2013

I really love this story and how it is developing. I have put you on my alert list :)  Also i noticed that you asked for a beta, if no one has responded i would be honored to be your beta :)  The only thing i could say i noticed is sometimes you forget to put the 'said' after someone has talked other than that i really like it :) <3

 

-mistress-


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 12) - Mon 06 May 2013

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 11) - Mon 06 May 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 11) - Mon 06 May 2013

loved it like always thanks.


Sy Sheer (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 May 2013

I'm a big fan of Knight Rider, oils and new, so I squealed (my brother's ears are my witnesses) in excitement and was even more excited to read your story. I hope you update because and I would love to read more.

Write lots and Have fun!  ~Sy


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 May 2013

I can't help but feel you should have left out him finding out about her past till later. Everything else is great, you need a beta though. Got a few grammar mistakes. Not my kind of story though.


mari (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 May 2013

loved the update thanks.


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