Men, his mom is MEAN!! I can't believe she did what she did. Lets hope she changes for the better. Great chapter. Good luck with the next :)
Denise (Chapter 9) - Sat 06 Jul 2013
Wow, so much emotions from everyone. Lets hope kagome gets through to them. :)
I'm confused, his hand was wrapped around who's throat?
Denise (Chapter 8) - Sat 06 Jul 2013
ahhh, I feel so bad for KAgome. She has important decisions to make. Lets hope Sesshoumaru backs her up in her decisions. Great chapter :)
Denise (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 Jul 2013
It seems like things got out of hand quickly. I hope they don't try to kill her. Lets see how Kagome deals with the information. Great chapter :D
Oh this is getting very interesting. You're doing a good job at keeping the pace and flow and the story itself lacks nothing. I just had to stay awake to catch up on what I missed. I like Sesshoumaru's interest in Kagome but he fights with himself for wanting her. I can't believe Kagome felt safe enough there to sleep nude but hey, to each his own. She sure stirred up a fire within him quickly enough and all she had to do was fight him back while in the nude.*laughs* I found it quite brave of her to take off running outside bare a***d. One never should run from a dog. It only creates the chase within them and she turned into prey. Couldn't believe he was angry with himself when he found her attractive and then got angry when she pushed him away to stop what he was doing to her in the forest. Poor Kagome didn't know what to think of him at that point.
So, you keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing Ok? You are doing a wonderful job with keeping my interest. JEN
I have 2 admit I get really excited every time I get an email saying you posted another chapter:)! I love it more and more with each chapter!! Can't wait 2 read the next 1!!!!!!!
P.S. I think you're going a little fast with the romantic development, and I agree with what zenfluence reviewed about time's effects on the human personality. A complacent character can get dull. However, this is just me sharing my thoughts with you, I I would never assume to try and tell you how to write your story.
Your story has caught my attention, I like where it appears to be headed and it seems you update often enough to keep the readers' attention. I also like the fresh situation you've provided in your story, with the saving of demon kind by interfering in the past. Have read very few that had a similar approach. So please keep updating, I am eager for this literary journey to continue!
loving it
Ealla (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Jul 2013
what a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Shaneka (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Jul 2013
Another excellent chapter, keep them coming.
Shaneka (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Jul 2013
Another excellent chapter, keep them coming.
I really like this plot. It seems to be following logic pretty well. The only advice I would have is don't make Kagome too complacent to Sesshoumaru's will. For someone who has lived for over fifty years in the warring states era, even the natural ease she had would be jaded slightly. I feel like Kagome should resist a little more. Just remember that fifty years does indeed change a person. [hell, I've had four and I'm totally different now from then..]
Hope this helps!
Keep up the good work!
I'm loving it!!!! You are truly an amazing writer!!!! Can't wait 4 you 2 update!!!!
Denise (Chapter 6) - Mon 01 Jul 2013
O my, she meet the heir. Hoe ecxiting. I do feel bad for the demons. Lets hope the council doesn't go after her. Great chapter. :D
Shaneka (Chapter 6) - Mon 01 Jul 2013
Excellent chapter, update soon.
Denise (Chapter 5) - Sun 30 Jun 2013
O men, i can't believe they are getting along. I wonder what the future holds for them. Also, I wonder how there relationship will progress through out the years. Awesome Chapter. :D
Denise (Chapter 4) - Sun 30 Jun 2013
So he may be nice to her...Yeah!!! Lets hope he has some bit of an open mind. Another great chapter :)
Denise (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Jun 2013
Geez. I can't believe he can be so mean, well I can lol. I hope he won't be so mean to her. Great chapter :)
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